Great story! Really enjoyed it ;)

Crazy! "Cock 'Survivor' in College" - [Of course, there's no real reason an unwilling contestant couldn't go to a hospital and be freed, but for the purposes of the story, we're ignoring that --] Being locked up WOULD be very motivating to horny 18-22 year old!

Sorry for the belated congratulations. I've read this through three times now, and I find more in it each time. All your stories are good, but this is beyond good. It's accurate and honest and unflinching. It demonstrates why we read stories, why we need stories. It's also an absolute joy--I say that even though the final installment made me use half a box of Kleenex, but they were happy tears. Thanks.

Awesome story! Thanks!

I'm getting hard just reading this story. Love it!! More please . . .

Please write more! I wonder if the Master will tire of his huge muscle boy and get a new one? If so how does James return to his old life so changed? Inquiring minds want to know!

Hot as fuck. I want a third.

What a great story! So fucking hot! More please of Dante and his puppy.

Thanks again for these very generous and encouraging comments! Paul's post particularly moved me.

Nice to see your own take on the "Calving Signs" slash Charles Wallace or bovine tf genre. In terms of ideas its consistent and the set up is great. I don't have any more *ideas* to give. You have a solid one. The scenarios and the victims are relatively familiar but distinct with web of pre-existing relationships and ongoing changes and ups and downs. But the set up is simplifying them so it helps you to avoid things getting out from your control. Good catch there too. But in terms of execution I think there is some room for improvement. I love the bit with the dad in the briefs. The idea of gluttony changing attitude, mentality, sexuality and appearance. But I feel the uhm "imagery" isn't used to the fullest. The sensual tastes and experience of the eatting of juicy meats leading to male form leading to sex. You have the outline, the direction. And yes I appreciate the character set up. Really this reminds me most of that one story with "I wanna be a musclehead. With a really big dick and a fucking hot butt" Part of what is missing, to me is you're a little distant in the perspectives telling us or summarizing when it feels we should be inside, seeing and feeling it. Even if this is an observer at a remove ... You do great with the scene in the bathroom. But instead of drawing out the flamboyant guys transformation you go straight to "his bovine voice" as if we won't get it so we're slammed to the end of the character's reaction and the conclusion as to drawn along or teased akin to the character whose perspective we share. I guess mainly I want to compliment the effort, want more but not in length but in richness of quality which you give in spurts and seem to be doing more of. I like that the father is the typical homophobic asshole but also has decent points. I like that the gay son seems your super liberal hipster, sorta, with "I'm too good for here" but NOT a loner, has a history, and STILL has affection for his dad and friends. It stings all the more as they change around him and he feels scared or freaked out from their opposing behavior, slightly intrigued, but mostly concerned and confused. I guess after you're finished with this we can see a sort of revised version or sequel where, like all the greats you can use your set up and ideas again and again to refine and improve them.