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JamieTi684
2/27/17, 4:32 PM
Amazing story! Hope you continue to write more!
Shaveslave
2/27/17, 2:14 PM
Excellent story! Had me stroking from start to finish!
Anonymous
2/27/17, 1:02 PM
This was a very well written, emotionally compelling story. Sort of "It's a Wonderful Life" meets "Somewhere in Time". The 1980s flashback was very realistic. I laughed aloud at some of the music and fashion descriptions. I couldn't put my finger on the point where I really started to care about the characters, but it was at some point in Scott's drunken foray to the fraternity house. The insights of the main character and how his subsequent actions based on those insights improved his life and the lives of others, made this story very heartwarming. How many people would "take a road less traveled" if they could get a taste of "50 year old Scotch"? Thank you for writing!
Johan
2/27/17, 10:04 AM
Very hot starting. Please continue! :)
Anonymous
2/27/17, 8:18 AM
Just a suggestion: Chris should make Scott wear something that make him look stupid on public. Maybe some ugly nerd clothes, dirty clothes from a dumpster, a frilly pink ballerina tutu, or even the cheerleader uniform of his own team!
Anonymous
2/27/17, 7:50 AM
Oh God, this is really good! I love the situation and the description is perfect, I'm anxious to see what happens next!
nnnrg
2/27/17, 5:19 AM
That could have gone one a bit longer, but the ending was a bit of a tearjerker in a good way. Kudos.
Feb 25, 2017
Anonymous
2/27/17, 5:15 AM
How many pups does Dante have
Anonymous
2/27/17, 3:48 AM
Keep it coming!
Anonymous
2/26/17, 10:12 PM
Story is so hot -- once suspend belief for key facts. Then, it's smooth sailing. So hot!!