Recent Comments

TheD
2/25/17, 8:02 PM
Please never stop writing. Your pacing is wonderful, and you maintain an excellent balance between the parts of the story you 'show' and the parts you more overtly 'tell.' Such a gift. I have been trying to write a story for ages in the hope that, with enough editing, rewriting, and input, it can satisfy in the way that Scott's story does.
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
2/25/17, 6:12 PM
Perfectly writen.......more of it please
Anonymous
2/25/17, 5:46 PM
Nice!! So many directions this could go!
Feb 9, 2017
2/25/17, 5:35 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I do agree that it ended a tad abruptly, and I may revisit this story to extend out the fun after the fall. The mental breakdown is always the part that gets me going the most, sometimes I forget to allow the readers to enjoy the sex part too. Will have to work on that.
Feb 25, 2017
Anonymous
2/25/17, 4:38 PM
Damn that was hot
Paul
2/25/17, 4:06 PM
What a wonderfully imagined and well-written story! It really resonated with me. I'm a long-married senior (just turned 65) with a wife I dearly love and two great kids that I'm really proud of. I'm also a closeted gay man and I've often thought about what if I could, like Scott, go back in time to my college days and have the courage to admit to my family and friends that I was a "homo-sexual" (the polite term when I was young). What I have been happier? Maybe. Had a more satisfying life? Possibly. I guess I've been lucky enough to end up where I am with many things to be grateful for. Thank you so much for writing something that I'll certainly come back to read again and again but keep thinking about what if...?
Charlie
2/25/17, 3:52 PM
I've loved many of your other stories Cris, But you did an exceptional job with this one. Torn between not wanting it to end and being completely satisfied with the ending. Great Job!!
Feb 25, 2017
Anonymous
2/25/17, 1:28 PM
Fucking hot!!! More please!!
Anonymous
2/25/17, 10:06 AM
I love it! Love freeze stories from you!
Blueron
2/25/17, 8:35 AM
Wow another GREAT! story , I love your attention to detail as the transformations happen in this story ! please give us more!