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Ned the Wino
2/24/17, 6:59 PM
To echo an earlier comment, I don't visit this website to bawl over stories (nor is there ever any reason to do so here), but I cried over Chapter 7. Thank you for this beautiful work!
2/24/17, 6:33 PM
I would say something crass like "As long as I get some substance out of you...", but I don't want to ruin the mood. Thanks to everyone for the kind words. I knew this wasn't going to be a typical story for the site, so I'm glad it touched a few of you.
baralai88@gmail.com
2/24/17, 5:31 PM
Really good start! Hope to see more
Anonymous
2/24/17, 5:20 PM
This is totally one of my fantasies bro. damn!!
Anonymous
2/24/17, 5:03 PM
I don't usually visit this site to get teary-eyed, but... wow. Kudos to you. I loved this story from beginning to end.
LongtimeFan
2/24/17, 4:14 PM
What a beautiful ending! The characters were so well written and interesting, and I genuinely felt for all of them (especially poor Philippe and Rafe--nice work on not holding back the honesty). Speaking of honesty, I loved that undercurrent appearing throughout the story--that so many people were unhappy because they weren't being true to themselves, and it was only by coming out/accepting who they are that they found any peace at all. This truly is an amazing story, and I can't wait to read more of your work!
Monstermash62
2/24/17, 3:19 PM
Holy! This story was amazing. Managed to get me really emotionally attached to Scott. Great job! I think this is your best one so far.
Anonymous
2/24/17, 11:31 AM
Yes, absolutely yes there needs to be more of this. There needs to be more stories like this. They need to let the Mafia win the game so they can keep having fun. You need to keep writing cause it's so good.
Anonymous
2/24/17, 10:57 AM
Amazing! Can't wait for more!!!
Cutlerfan
2/24/17, 8:21 AM
Please continue this!