Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/19/17, 3:55 PM
Wow great adaptation from a great and incredibly prolific author. I had only read their forays into M/M over the years, so I never realized that all of the "jukebox" stories were song titles lol
LongtimeFan
2/19/17, 3:13 PM
Love it! Like one of the above commenters said, I love the intense focus on the mind slowly becoming dumb and apathetic (for some reason, guys turning apathetic is one of my biggest turn-ons). Don't know if this is what H.P. had in mind, but I like it! :p (Praise Yog-Sothoth!) Keep up the solid work, Hypnothrill!
Anonymous
2/19/17, 1:58 PM
Great start! Looking forward to the next!
Anonymous
2/19/17, 1:41 PM
Great story. Thanks for writing!
Feb 18, 2017
Anonymous
2/19/17, 1:31 PM
Awesome start. Perhaps you could leave a paragraph to every dialogue and not make it into a whole paragraph would be great. But nevertheless. Cant wait for the next chapter. Very unique story and am excited for the next one. Thanks for sharing btw.
Feb 18, 2017
Anonymous
2/19/17, 12:40 PM
Great story. Just one comment: the character should not know it's a chapter - he's just telling a story.
Anonymous
2/19/17, 8:53 AM
Great story. Totally sucked me into the emotional rollercoaster :) Thanks for sharing it.
Anonymous
2/19/17, 8:39 AM
Wonderfully written...excellent
Anonymous
2/19/17, 8:02 AM
The lack of comments speaks volumes.
simon
2/19/17, 6:55 AM
would like to read more