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H
2/15/17, 12:49 AM
I'm headed to an escape room soon and I will be very disappointed now when I don't get converted
Vanessa_Teardrop
2/14/17, 5:58 PM
This is a great transformation story. A second chapter would be fun.
Anonymous
2/14/17, 5:56 PM
Awesome story. Excellent premise. Would love to see more stories like this. Thanks for posting
Cliff
2/14/17, 4:10 PM
Like this juicy part, waiting for more physical and psychological transformation.
Anonymous
2/14/17, 3:51 PM
It's not a re-write. It's a 'practically acut and paste"
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
2/14/17, 3:15 PM
Ok.......so its a re-writing for sure.........should've mentioned it........but still hot
TimNJ
2/14/17, 2:30 PM
Agreed, hot story! And yes, do a ballet-themed story!
Anonymous
2/14/17, 11:01 AM
Loved this ... now how about a story having to do with your name ... ballet boy
GoodBiForever
2/14/17, 7:14 AM
This is an excellent M/M rewrite of Re-Genisis by Ansuz (Found here: http://mcstories.com/Regenisis/Regenisis.html), one of the first MC stories that I recall ever reading, many years ago. Since I prefer to give people the benefit of the doubt, I'm going to assume it's entirely an accident that you neglected to credit (or even mention) the original author or story. Probably too distracted and it slipped your mind, it happens <3
Anonymous
2/14/17, 5:02 AM
Okay. They're sex slaves. Now what? That's where I would go for the next chapter. By the way, except for misspelling of "his" (there were a number of "hi" which as read as missing an s, this was well written. For someone who acknowledges that English is not your first language, this was well written. Grammar and usage were very good. There are English-speaking writers who post stuff on this website whose grammar and usage suck. You did very well!! Keep it up.