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Cutlerfan
2/13/17, 10:06 PM
Awesome ending!
2/13/17, 9:21 PM
A website with the phrase "mind control" in its name is probably an unlikely place to post this link, but it feels relevant to this discussion thread. Worth a thought -- and I don't think being a decent positive person necessarily prohibits one from indulging in the odd bit of revenge fantasy fiction now and then. :) Say goodbye to being a mean gay, it’s time to cheer each other on "If your friends don’t shine, you don’t shine, and the brighter their light shines, the more that glow will reflect upon you." http://attitude.co.uk/say-goodbye-to-being-a-mean-gay-its-time-to-cheer-each-other-on/
Anonymous
2/13/17, 8:32 PM
I'm in love with this story. This could easily be adapted into a screenplay.
Anonymous
2/13/17, 7:47 PM
Excellent story!!
Feb 9, 2017
Anonymous
2/13/17, 5:29 PM
loved it
jonah
2/13/17, 3:07 PM
i want to know how robert became like that
timsuks
2/13/17, 11:24 AM
great start. hope this is going on to be a series. keep UP the good work
Anonymous
2/13/17, 4:05 AM
That was hot!
Shiro
2/13/17, 1:40 AM
Can't wait for Ch. 3 !!!
Cutlerfan
2/13/17, 12:47 AM
A Super continuation! I highly doubt his future will turn out the same now.