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jockedguy
2/10/17, 6:44 PM
Could be that Meatheadz is coming to town, looking for more Meatheadz to audition for the newest season of Meatheadz, sponsored by Meatz...
BlindSeer
2/10/17, 5:22 PM
Another good chapter. There were more details this time, so it was easier to understand Alex's change. You're also making good use of the three different methods of conversion, leading to different plot lines for all the characters. I particularly like that they refer to themselves as "dumbasses" something i know people do in real life when trying to dumb down. I still think you could be more detailed though. We know Jared is a runner and Scott is a vegetarian, but we dont know what they actually look like. Details would make the before, during, and after better. I'm also curious what happened to Jared's brother Scott. The only thing I'd be interested in seeing is Scott figuring out what is going on and choosing to join of his own free will. Its your story though, and you've done a great job so far and as long you write wgat you want, i'm sure it will continue to be great.
Anonymous
2/10/17, 5:20 PM
Whose cock will Scott suck in the end ? Can't wait his radical transformation...he should join them!!
Anonymous
2/10/17, 5:07 PM
Get Scott through the sauce, then with the meat for the final touch
Anonymous
2/10/17, 4:40 PM
So many characters, so many meatheads!!
Nov 28, 2016
boboo
2/10/17, 4:38 PM
Please update I want to see him cum!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
2/10/17, 3:44 PM
Excellent work!!!!
2/10/17, 3:32 PM
"@xORRiNx: I'm in a pretty bad mood from having to defend a back story of all things." "Of all things"? Are you a writer or just a typist? A real writer is concerned with every aspect of what they write and should be able to defend their choices, no matter whether they're writing the great American novel or little jerk-off stories for a free website. Tell an editor sometime that you don't want to defend the backstory of your characters. Nobody in this entire thread has told you to stop writing. In fact, I'd say most who were critical have taken pains to compliment your writing while pointing out what didn't work for them in this particular piece. I'm sorry to hear that you've lost friends in real life because of your attitude, although the portrait you paint of yourself isn't exactly flattering. If something hasn't happened to you, therefore it doesn't happen? You don't have to become a militant protestor to acknowledge that others may have had different life experiences than you. Work on your empathy, friend. It'll make you a better writer and a better person.
Anonymous
2/10/17, 2:19 PM
Hypnothrill, great as always. Really appreciate it. We would be able to have a really hot weekend :) Especially glad to know that Scott be the last man to join the army of meatheads. It would be thrilling that Scott got aware of what was going on and his family and friends forced him to join. Wish to see the mastermind of this scheme and his subordinates and their ultimate motive. It might be a sequel after the conclusion of this trilogy but would give this universe a depth. Another suggestion? I wish to know how their face look like energized, blank or whatever. My favorite is a blank zombie face with awkwardly jock stereotype hyper-energetic attitude such as programmed to do that.
LongtimeFan
2/10/17, 12:53 PM
Not even 8:00 and I'm already "excited..." Another win, Hypnothrill! :D And it's cool that you're asking us to help out, too. Some possible ideas: -Seeing just what makes the sauce so good (and transformative) -Tied to the above, it sounds like Scott is going to need a direct hit from the source to break his vegetarian ways...maybe some force-feeding? -I admit I get turned on by authority figures becoming bro-like...maybe a professor (Intro to Drama?) plays the Meat Pit music for a special guys-only class, and snags Eric? -A possible idea for an epilogue: we find out that the Meathead chain has been established in a new town/college, and Scott and Jared are the latest stars of Meatheads. Those are my ideas, such as they are. Thanks again for a great start to Friday! :)