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Anonymous
2/10/17, 2:19 PM
Hypnothrill, great as always. Really appreciate it. We would be able to have a really hot weekend :) Especially glad to know that Scott be the last man to join the army of meatheads. It would be thrilling that Scott got aware of what was going on and his family and friends forced him to join. Wish to see the mastermind of this scheme and his subordinates and their ultimate motive. It might be a sequel after the conclusion of this trilogy but would give this universe a depth. Another suggestion? I wish to know how their face look like energized, blank or whatever. My favorite is a blank zombie face with awkwardly jock stereotype hyper-energetic attitude such as programmed to do that.
LongtimeFan
2/10/17, 12:53 PM
Not even 8:00 and I'm already "excited..." Another win, Hypnothrill! :D And it's cool that you're asking us to help out, too. Some possible ideas: -Seeing just what makes the sauce so good (and transformative) -Tied to the above, it sounds like Scott is going to need a direct hit from the source to break his vegetarian ways...maybe some force-feeding? -I admit I get turned on by authority figures becoming bro-like...maybe a professor (Intro to Drama?) plays the Meat Pit music for a special guys-only class, and snags Eric? -A possible idea for an epilogue: we find out that the Meathead chain has been established in a new town/college, and Scott and Jared are the latest stars of Meatheads. Those are my ideas, such as they are. Thanks again for a great start to Friday! :)
Anonymous
2/10/17, 10:10 AM
@xORRiNx I'm sorry for attacking your work, m8. The antagonist's motive really doesn't make sense to me, but the other's say they pretty much just ignore it. It really just bugs me because it was illogical. After reading what happened to you, that your friends turned against you for not going to protests, I guess it really does happens in real life. It's just like fictional toddlers. You can hear them say "fuck you" in real life, but when you read it in a book, it doesn't make sense and it makes the story too unrealistic, even for a fiction. I just want to say that your ex-friends were a bunch of idiots. There's no logic on what they did. butsoisyourantagonist-oki'llstop The rest of the story is pretty hot. There are only few stories about a masc gay being topped by a straight man which actually makes sense because his mind was messed with. Make the next one about a Nazi x Communist turned into a Cuck x Sissy porn for all I care, just make sure it makes sense.
Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
2/10/17, 9:39 AM
Very hot!!!
Feb 9, 2017
Anonymous
2/10/17, 7:31 AM
Part 2??
Anonymous
2/10/17, 6:45 AM
This is kinda depressing now :(
2/10/17, 6:21 AM
Write whatever makes you feel good, buddy. My only real advice is to focus on what YOU like. Stop worrying so much about other people. Take it in, sure, and use it to grow as a writer. But in the end, don't take it all so seriously. People are always gonna have an opinion. But only you can decide whether or not it's going to affect you. If you wanna stop writing because it's all too much to take and you don't think you can handle the shit thrown at you, that's ok too. Just don't let something you enjoy doing get you down and feeling defensive. Take a break, think about what you wanna do, and get back to it. Peace, my friend :)
2/10/17, 6:17 AM
Sorry about it...my life is in another one of those transition phases. Working overtime a shit ton while preparing to move to Chicago means looking for a job, getting an Illinois nurses license, and planning the move...while still working 4-5 12 hour shifts a week and then trying to see friends before I move...so, the little free time I have, I sleep, hahaha. But, honestly, I am still working on Chapter 10. It will come out eventually :P With still more craziness from our two Re-Educator holders. I love you guys and I'm so happy you all STILL have a passion for my stupid little story. Let's keep it positive and focus on what we all come to this site to share...a love of hypnotized men.
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 6:17 AM
You see what politics does!!!!!! Look at us! We all have the same sexual fetishes and the evil that is politics is dividing! I hate the whole thing that I think I wanted to become a victim deep down. ...That might be the reason why I have been craving the whole master/sub fantasy in real life! ;) I think that's what I want to write about right now via a new story. Something about the degradation into a sub pup pig slave... I gotta put humiliation into that one. That alpha's gunna have to be masc as fuck, maybe a body builder. ;)
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 5:41 AM
So yea, maybe the plot wasn't perfect. I admit that. But all of you who are REALLY REALLY against this theme are just like the friends that I've had to ditch from real life because they don't tolerate my " do me " attitude.