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Anonymous
2/10/17, 4:40 PM
So many characters, so many meatheads!!
Nov 28, 2016
boboo
2/10/17, 4:38 PM
Please update I want to see him cum!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous
2/10/17, 3:44 PM
Excellent work!!!!
2/10/17, 3:32 PM
"@xORRiNx: I'm in a pretty bad mood from having to defend a back story of all things." "Of all things"? Are you a writer or just a typist? A real writer is concerned with every aspect of what they write and should be able to defend their choices, no matter whether they're writing the great American novel or little jerk-off stories for a free website. Tell an editor sometime that you don't want to defend the backstory of your characters. Nobody in this entire thread has told you to stop writing. In fact, I'd say most who were critical have taken pains to compliment your writing while pointing out what didn't work for them in this particular piece. I'm sorry to hear that you've lost friends in real life because of your attitude, although the portrait you paint of yourself isn't exactly flattering. If something hasn't happened to you, therefore it doesn't happen? You don't have to become a militant protestor to acknowledge that others may have had different life experiences than you. Work on your empathy, friend. It'll make you a better writer and a better person.
Anonymous
2/10/17, 2:19 PM
Hypnothrill, great as always. Really appreciate it. We would be able to have a really hot weekend :) Especially glad to know that Scott be the last man to join the army of meatheads. It would be thrilling that Scott got aware of what was going on and his family and friends forced him to join. Wish to see the mastermind of this scheme and his subordinates and their ultimate motive. It might be a sequel after the conclusion of this trilogy but would give this universe a depth. Another suggestion? I wish to know how their face look like energized, blank or whatever. My favorite is a blank zombie face with awkwardly jock stereotype hyper-energetic attitude such as programmed to do that.
LongtimeFan
2/10/17, 12:53 PM
Not even 8:00 and I'm already "excited..." Another win, Hypnothrill! :D And it's cool that you're asking us to help out, too. Some possible ideas: -Seeing just what makes the sauce so good (and transformative) -Tied to the above, it sounds like Scott is going to need a direct hit from the source to break his vegetarian ways...maybe some force-feeding? -I admit I get turned on by authority figures becoming bro-like...maybe a professor (Intro to Drama?) plays the Meat Pit music for a special guys-only class, and snags Eric? -A possible idea for an epilogue: we find out that the Meathead chain has been established in a new town/college, and Scott and Jared are the latest stars of Meatheads. Those are my ideas, such as they are. Thanks again for a great start to Friday! :)
Anonymous
2/10/17, 10:10 AM
@xORRiNx I'm sorry for attacking your work, m8. The antagonist's motive really doesn't make sense to me, but the other's say they pretty much just ignore it. It really just bugs me because it was illogical. After reading what happened to you, that your friends turned against you for not going to protests, I guess it really does happens in real life. It's just like fictional toddlers. You can hear them say "fuck you" in real life, but when you read it in a book, it doesn't make sense and it makes the story too unrealistic, even for a fiction. I just want to say that your ex-friends were a bunch of idiots. There's no logic on what they did. butsoisyourantagonist-oki'llstop The rest of the story is pretty hot. There are only few stories about a masc gay being topped by a straight man which actually makes sense because his mind was messed with. Make the next one about a Nazi x Communist turned into a Cuck x Sissy porn for all I care, just make sure it makes sense.
Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
2/10/17, 9:39 AM
Very hot!!!
Feb 9, 2017
Anonymous
2/10/17, 7:31 AM
Part 2??
Anonymous
2/10/17, 6:45 AM
This is kinda depressing now :(