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Anonymous
2/10/17, 10:10 AM
@xORRiNx I'm sorry for attacking your work, m8. The antagonist's motive really doesn't make sense to me, but the other's say they pretty much just ignore it. It really just bugs me because it was illogical. After reading what happened to you, that your friends turned against you for not going to protests, I guess it really does happens in real life. It's just like fictional toddlers. You can hear them say "fuck you" in real life, but when you read it in a book, it doesn't make sense and it makes the story too unrealistic, even for a fiction. I just want to say that your ex-friends were a bunch of idiots. There's no logic on what they did. butsoisyourantagonist-oki'llstop The rest of the story is pretty hot. There are only few stories about a masc gay being topped by a straight man which actually makes sense because his mind was messed with. Make the next one about a Nazi x Communist turned into a Cuck x Sissy porn for all I care, just make sure it makes sense.
Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
2/10/17, 9:39 AM
Very hot!!!
Feb 9, 2017
Anonymous
2/10/17, 7:31 AM
Part 2??
Anonymous
2/10/17, 6:45 AM
This is kinda depressing now :(
2/10/17, 6:21 AM
Write whatever makes you feel good, buddy. My only real advice is to focus on what YOU like. Stop worrying so much about other people. Take it in, sure, and use it to grow as a writer. But in the end, don't take it all so seriously. People are always gonna have an opinion. But only you can decide whether or not it's going to affect you. If you wanna stop writing because it's all too much to take and you don't think you can handle the shit thrown at you, that's ok too. Just don't let something you enjoy doing get you down and feeling defensive. Take a break, think about what you wanna do, and get back to it. Peace, my friend :)
2/10/17, 6:17 AM
Sorry about it...my life is in another one of those transition phases. Working overtime a shit ton while preparing to move to Chicago means looking for a job, getting an Illinois nurses license, and planning the move...while still working 4-5 12 hour shifts a week and then trying to see friends before I move...so, the little free time I have, I sleep, hahaha. But, honestly, I am still working on Chapter 10. It will come out eventually :P With still more craziness from our two Re-Educator holders. I love you guys and I'm so happy you all STILL have a passion for my stupid little story. Let's keep it positive and focus on what we all come to this site to share...a love of hypnotized men.
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 6:17 AM
You see what politics does!!!!!! Look at us! We all have the same sexual fetishes and the evil that is politics is dividing! I hate the whole thing that I think I wanted to become a victim deep down. ...That might be the reason why I have been craving the whole master/sub fantasy in real life! ;) I think that's what I want to write about right now via a new story. Something about the degradation into a sub pup pig slave... I gotta put humiliation into that one. That alpha's gunna have to be masc as fuck, maybe a body builder. ;)
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 5:41 AM
So yea, maybe the plot wasn't perfect. I admit that. But all of you who are REALLY REALLY against this theme are just like the friends that I've had to ditch from real life because they don't tolerate my " do me " attitude.
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 5:40 AM
In real life, yes, in real life... I have lost friends because I won't go to protests with them. (I explain why) I have always had a life motto of "focus on yourself and judge what you see with your own eyes and not what others tell you to think." I mention that because all of my ex-liberal friends always accused me of not caring, and being ignorant to reality. In my whole adult life I have never experienced bigotry to me (and I'm a waiter I interface with many people daily), and I have also never felt discriminated against. Now, yes, there are isolated instances. But as a whole, it's all fear mongering. I wrote this story partly based off that but not stemming from my own personal life. I wrote this because I've been so frustrated with politics on this matter.
barrydillon80@gmail.com
2/10/17, 4:55 AM
The title is the only thing that is "wrong" with this story. The story itself isn't that different than other stories on here, but because of the title people are going to come into it with tons of baggage and preconceptions. The title makes it seem like it is going to be political, but then it is kind of ambiguous what message you are trying to send...that may actually have been your intent. I interpreted it to mean exactly the opposite of other posters, and it seems that it is because I have different political views from them. xORRiNx, you are a really great writer of stories, but your comment on liberal democrats is very disappointing. I'm a liberal democrat, but I don't think that means I think all gays are victims. I am from the midwest, thought, so maybe I am just not diehard enough. I do think that Trump is going to make things much more difficult for LGBT people. Still, there are gay people who voted for him, and I would hardly see them as victims; more like masochists.