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Anonymous
2/10/17, 6:45 AM
This is kinda depressing now :(
2/10/17, 6:21 AM
Write whatever makes you feel good, buddy. My only real advice is to focus on what YOU like. Stop worrying so much about other people. Take it in, sure, and use it to grow as a writer. But in the end, don't take it all so seriously. People are always gonna have an opinion. But only you can decide whether or not it's going to affect you. If you wanna stop writing because it's all too much to take and you don't think you can handle the shit thrown at you, that's ok too. Just don't let something you enjoy doing get you down and feeling defensive. Take a break, think about what you wanna do, and get back to it. Peace, my friend :)
2/10/17, 6:17 AM
Sorry about it...my life is in another one of those transition phases. Working overtime a shit ton while preparing to move to Chicago means looking for a job, getting an Illinois nurses license, and planning the move...while still working 4-5 12 hour shifts a week and then trying to see friends before I move...so, the little free time I have, I sleep, hahaha. But, honestly, I am still working on Chapter 10. It will come out eventually :P With still more craziness from our two Re-Educator holders. I love you guys and I'm so happy you all STILL have a passion for my stupid little story. Let's keep it positive and focus on what we all come to this site to share...a love of hypnotized men.
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 6:17 AM
You see what politics does!!!!!! Look at us! We all have the same sexual fetishes and the evil that is politics is dividing! I hate the whole thing that I think I wanted to become a victim deep down. ...That might be the reason why I have been craving the whole master/sub fantasy in real life! ;) I think that's what I want to write about right now via a new story. Something about the degradation into a sub pup pig slave... I gotta put humiliation into that one. That alpha's gunna have to be masc as fuck, maybe a body builder. ;)
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 5:41 AM
So yea, maybe the plot wasn't perfect. I admit that. But all of you who are REALLY REALLY against this theme are just like the friends that I've had to ditch from real life because they don't tolerate my " do me " attitude.
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 5:40 AM
In real life, yes, in real life... I have lost friends because I won't go to protests with them. (I explain why) I have always had a life motto of "focus on yourself and judge what you see with your own eyes and not what others tell you to think." I mention that because all of my ex-liberal friends always accused me of not caring, and being ignorant to reality. In my whole adult life I have never experienced bigotry to me (and I'm a waiter I interface with many people daily), and I have also never felt discriminated against. Now, yes, there are isolated instances. But as a whole, it's all fear mongering. I wrote this story partly based off that but not stemming from my own personal life. I wrote this because I've been so frustrated with politics on this matter.
barrydillon80@gmail.com
2/10/17, 4:55 AM
The title is the only thing that is "wrong" with this story. The story itself isn't that different than other stories on here, but because of the title people are going to come into it with tons of baggage and preconceptions. The title makes it seem like it is going to be political, but then it is kind of ambiguous what message you are trying to send...that may actually have been your intent. I interpreted it to mean exactly the opposite of other posters, and it seems that it is because I have different political views from them. xORRiNx, you are a really great writer of stories, but your comment on liberal democrats is very disappointing. I'm a liberal democrat, but I don't think that means I think all gays are victims. I am from the midwest, thought, so maybe I am just not diehard enough. I do think that Trump is going to make things much more difficult for LGBT people. Still, there are gay people who voted for him, and I would hardly see them as victims; more like masochists.
Anonymous
2/10/17, 4:48 AM
@Defending is one hell of a drug For me, it had nothing to do with politics. I couldn't care less about that in a story unless it actually has a pivotal role to play. What was lacking was proper transition and a clearly defined motive, which thanks to the author explaining it per comments, made it make sense. You fail your audience when you cannot get them to see the perspective you've designed or a parallel structure to it thereof and this missed the mark entirely. While I disagree against those who wanted to attack it because they saw something political about it, most of this could have been avoided if it was clearly defined what was going on and why was it necessary. All this gave was a who, where and what and how, not the when and why, the last especially the huge part of any story that is needed. This isn't a bash, but honesty. Orrin, you're an incredible writer, but when the heat comes, like in this case, you scream and run away. Take the heat with stride, learn to improve or else wherever you go on another site, it won't be the last time. Learn to stop running and get where some of the fans with common sense that love your style are telling you when something is tacky or just doesn't make much sense at all. They are the individuals who love your work and know when you can do better, like in this instance.
xORRiNx
2/10/17, 4:34 AM
Fuck it. I'm in a pretty bad mood from having to defend a back story of all things. Peace out gayspirals. I'll keep writing but not here.
Anonymous
2/10/17, 4:22 AM
Warped mind!! But I'm loving this series. It's like 'The Sopranos' in hell -- and hot steamy sex!