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Haters Got to Hate
2/9/17, 8:50 PM
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Anonymous
2/9/17, 7:54 PM
The introduction of the story sucks. The motive doesn't make sense. And your antagonist is a fucking idiot for going to another gay man instead of the people they're protesting against. The story is a lot better if read at the start of the shower scene instead of pushing a political agenda.
Lenny
2/9/17, 7:50 PM
Hey xORRiNx don't worry to much about some posters. I want to say I appreciate your writing. I don't have the patience or ability to do it effectively. Also this story has generated tons of discussion, that is extremely great.
xORRiNx
2/9/17, 7:08 PM
I really don't understand half of these comments so I don't know how to respond. If you're a diehard democrat liberal and your belief is that all gays in this country are inherently victims then this story is probably just naturally going to piss you off. Whatever! Grow up!
unicorn
2/9/17, 5:15 PM
My gay heaven is nothing like that- that is gay assimilation. I want heaven to have unicorns, thong clad hard bodies, and tons of dildo shops.
Anonymous
2/9/17, 4:08 PM
its been so long :(
Anonymous
2/9/17, 3:35 PM
"Also, please tell me what kind of "time and place" does the story occur, where an openly gay jock can work out in a gym without being gay bashed, can use the same showers with straight men, graduate high school as a jock, and live with a straight guy without any hostility, because that's actually gay-heaven to me." I don't know about the high school part, but for the rest: NYC, San Francisco, London, Toronto, Vancouver, probably Sydney, Berlin, and others. Where are you living? If you'd like to experience this "heaven" you should definitely move. Or at least visit these other cities, if you can.
Anonymous
2/9/17, 9:28 AM
You know what would actually makes sense: the antagonist using his "magic" or "tech" to the people they're protesting against.
Anonymous
2/9/17, 9:09 AM
I actually leave the comments section of "revenge" stories alone. Writers just use bullying to justify the protagonist to humiliate others, or to justify humiliating the protagonist because he's a homophobe. I'd even forgive the story if the antagonist of the story actually just admits that he's just jelly. But the hypocrisy pushed me off the cliff. The antagonist wanted the protagonist to teach him about gay rights by turning him to a weak sissy and his straight friend to a homophobic bully. It doesn't make sense. Also, please tell me what kind of "time and place" does the story occur, where an openly gay jock can work out in a gym without being gay bashed, can use the same showers with straight men, graduate high school as a jock, and live with a straight guy without any hostility, because that's actually gay-heaven to me. But I have to admit. This is where the title "Fear Mongering" fits so well. It's just that the moral high ground the antagonist took by using gay rights is too tall for me to handle.
Anonymous
2/9/17, 8:30 AM
I enjoy this and I hope more people pop on who say they like it than otherwise. This is very close to a fantasy of mine. Perhaps I should write something of my own, just worried about bandwagoning..