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Jun 21, 2025
Anonymous
6/24/25, 8:45 AM
Kinda boring actually. All the good parts (the moment of change and mind manipulation) are kinda glossed over. It feels rushed, and ironically seems to have no focus, as if the events arent actually happening. This story should've spent some more time in the drafts, because it's an alright premise, with a dissapointing execution.
Drifting Scot
6/24/25, 8:36 AM
Beautifuly written. Very hot...looking forward to next part!
6/24/25, 7:40 AM
I remembered this story again the other day; I still love it! Really hoping for a continuation sometime!
6/24/25, 6:31 AM
Would be awsome if he had gained a dad bod from all the drinking but his dumb swager make him think he was model esk
6/24/25, 6:11 AM
Let the fun begin! 😈 Also, I have a small feeling Jake is also a faggot for sure. You should taken coach up on his offer. He would have made him your bitch. In time we will tell who are the fags on the team. 😏
6/24/25, 4:51 AM
Can't wait for more.
6/24/25, 4:32 AM
i love this story! So creative! Who would have imagined that these attractive flowers could have such power? If you liked this story, you might also like this audio story with a somewhat similar plot and evoked emotions but with a much different outcome... [Heavy Prey: Perennial Peril (with background binaural)](https://www.chaotichypno.com/heavy-prey-perennial-peril) To play, click on the play icon for both voice and binaural.
6/24/25, 4:27 AM
Hot. Can't wait for more