Recent Comments

xORRiNx
2/9/17, 12:59 AM
I just saw all the new comments... what the hell is going on, lol? I'll take the criticism about the TF any day but everyone should know that I didn't mean this to have a political message in real life translation. I meant for this to be about a cocky gay guy who has never had to experience fag-bashing of any kind because he's been a hot jock. At the end of the story he felt belittled and would probably think twice about bullying. Remember, his cock was programmed to react to the pubes, not his mind. I should have been more clear but he was quite turned off to his treatment.
2/9/17, 12:24 AM
Just wanted to say I've really been enjoying this whole series--just wish there was a bit more sex! Also, while I see the appeal for you in having all of the characters ending up looking like one another, I wouldn't mind seeing Hoss or Bubba "growing up" a bit, and becoming more of a daddy figure for the rest of them. Also, good job upsetting people! Don't let it get to you in the least. If they feel so strongly about it, they can go write stories about fat people getting fit--except they won't because it's always easier to criticize and tear down than actually make something yourself.
GaymerGeek
2/9/17, 12:15 AM
So happy everyone has enjoyed my first story. I'll be posting more as soon as time allows!
TheWanderer
2/8/17, 11:51 PM
Is it the ghost possessing though? I reread previous chapter and there doesn't seem to be any cause for those transformations to happen. Would love to read more, just can't help but wondering what's the cause of it.
Anonymous
2/8/17, 10:59 PM
I think that this might be the one that I liked the least, but only because I would love to see it backfire on Andrew and his friends. I'm glad that you didn't have Tyler play the game, because the 'turn an intelligent straight man into a drooling idiot gay whore' is probably my biggest turn off. Though I do admit to loving having an extremely intelligent, high powered straight man turned into an extremely intelligent, high powered, secret gay sex slave. I'm interested in seeing why the game didn't move on to the next group of players and look forward to reading chapter 5. (hopefully soon?)
rcmorales9014@gmail.com
2/8/17, 10:49 PM
I really wished some of themale foot fetish sites would do the time freeze. Big fan of shows like Twilight Zone, and Meatballs 3, that did the time freeze, always said to myself alot of those hot guys would've found themselves undressed withwet sticky cum between their toes and feet. I like practicing this fantasy with male escorts from time to time.
AeonFlux
2/8/17, 10:32 PM
A perfect end to a great story .....thanx😁
Anonymous
2/8/17, 9:08 PM
Cris, xORRiNx's roommate, looked up after the remark. He’d been chilling on his laptop in bed when xORRiNx came in. “Yea but aren’t you a writer though? You’re supposed to be in there improving right along with them haha,” Cris joked.
story idea
2/8/17, 8:05 PM
Author gets revenge on his story critics by making them his victims in chapter 2
punch a nazi
2/8/17, 8:02 PM
Your either with us 100% or your wrong. You do not deserve to be a hot gay with straight buds -- that's a gay version of an Uncle Tom. You also can not say I am not a homophobic white nazi because I have a gay friend especially if he is not a woke gay. These dudes deserved it. This story rocks!!