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Anonymous
2/5/17, 7:02 PM
Love this premise!!!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 6:17 PM
I'm really interested. I hope this gets finished!
Huey Long
2/5/17, 5:56 PM
"When Fascism comes to America, it will (be in the name of/come under the guise of/be called) anti-Fascism!" Sam is antifa. Here we are reminded the evil besides us sometimes is worse than the one we oppose. Great writing
Anonymous
2/5/17, 5:52 PM
Some freaky shit!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 5:51 PM
Good effort!! As you continue in your writing, your desire to be creative, choose your words and make images with words will take over. If you read stories on this website, you'll know what I mean.
Anonymous
2/5/17, 5:17 PM
Ah, Magic! Nice.
Anonymous
2/5/17, 5:01 PM
Terrific work!!!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 3:48 PM
Great!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:57 PM
Wow. Great final episode to the story. The reader is told all the secrets - spells, mind control, sexual orientation change, lust, rejection - while only Emily has a faint idea of what is going on. I really like that you showed what was going on, rather than simply stated it. Readers could figure out for themselves what was happening, based on the descriptions. The characters themselves are clueless. Scary good!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:22 PM
Scary hot here, as Cody dumbs down and muscles up. Enticing but scary! Also gross with the sweat and dirty clothes and farting, but, hey, it's just us guys, right?....(waggles eyebrows suggestively)