Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/5/17, 3:48 PM
Great!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:57 PM
Wow. Great final episode to the story. The reader is told all the secrets - spells, mind control, sexual orientation change, lust, rejection - while only Emily has a faint idea of what is going on. I really like that you showed what was going on, rather than simply stated it. Readers could figure out for themselves what was happening, based on the descriptions. The characters themselves are clueless. Scary good!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:22 PM
Scary hot here, as Cody dumbs down and muscles up. Enticing but scary! Also gross with the sweat and dirty clothes and farting, but, hey, it's just us guys, right?....(waggles eyebrows suggestively)
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:10 PM
Intriguing ..... where did this "muscle-bound red head" just suddenly appear from? Hmm....almost like there' some sort of master plan at work......:)
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:04 PM
I think the next room mate should be a very fit young str8 bodybuilder with a big cock ;-)
Anonymous
2/5/17, 1:57 PM
Nice description of muscle growth and growing sexiness in a thousand words. Mission accomplished!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 1:27 PM
I love this series! Please, write Chapter 6
Anonymous
2/5/17, 12:45 PM
Great short story dude. Thanks alot!
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2/5/17, 11:40 AM
(Turn for the worse that is... hadn't noticed I wasn't logged in when I posted comment so now can't go back and fix spelling. Oops.)
Anonymous
2/5/17, 11:38 AM
Thanks. Glad you are enjoying. :-). Had meant to add a note saying that there are actually two more chapters. Next one is fairly short (I should submit today after a final proofread) where Calvin's life takes another turn for the worst. And the last one is kind of an epilogue to wrap up the plot. Ending may not be" happy" but I think Calvin will be. Lol.