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Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
2/5/17, 11:40 AM
(Turn for the worse that is... hadn't noticed I wasn't logged in when I posted comment so now can't go back and fix spelling. Oops.)
Anonymous
2/5/17, 11:38 AM
Thanks. Glad you are enjoying. :-). Had meant to add a note saying that there are actually two more chapters. Next one is fairly short (I should submit today after a final proofread) where Calvin's life takes another turn for the worst. And the last one is kind of an epilogue to wrap up the plot. Ending may not be" happy" but I think Calvin will be. Lol.
Anonymous
2/5/17, 10:30 AM
Beautifully structured story ! I had to read it twice to appreciate how both boys were the coach's puppets. Sinester coolness :)
Anonymous
2/5/17, 9:55 AM
Meh. Well-written, but I don't get off on homophobes. When you gonna put the next chapter of Constant Production out? That's what I'm waiting for.
Anonymous
2/5/17, 7:24 AM
Very hot but hopes he get a better treatment.
Orc_br
2/5/17, 6:15 AM
Maybe Sam was just being envious of Taylor life, and wanted to destroy it. People do that all the time.
Anonymous
2/5/17, 6:02 AM
SO HOT! I love dumbing down stories, and this one is especially good, you've made one of best descriptions of a smart guy becoming a moron. Very, very HOT! You've said this was going to be the last chapter, but the final part of the chapter sounds like there could be another one. Do you plan to add another instalment? I would like to know what Calvin will do with all those apps and to read more of how the dumb fag slut is humiliated and ridiculed.
Reddywhp
2/5/17, 6:02 AM
Fucking well done.
2/5/17, 4:32 AM
I really like the voice of narrator - he's so excited by the events around them and doesn't stop and analyze them. Really fun story! Thank you!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 3:22 AM
Great!!!