Recent Comments

2/5/17, 4:32 AM
I really like the voice of narrator - he's so excited by the events around them and doesn't stop and analyze them. Really fun story! Thank you!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 3:22 AM
Great!!!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:56 AM
Don't be that guy 😐
Anonymous
2/5/17, 12:21 AM
Man in Pink. A new gay superhero? :0)
fan
2/4/17, 11:00 PM
congratulations to writing this story! I like this a lot! You write good, and personally like how Mark identifies as I bottom. This site needs more bottom protagonists! keep it up and keep writing, okay?
alx62
2/4/17, 10:36 PM
absolutely brilliant mmm had me twitching and so horny look forward to more
Anonymous
2/4/17, 9:32 PM
Yeah as Wesley said my problem was that the awfulness of his punishment felt like a left hook. It's a hot story don't get me wrong but I really wasn't ready or in the mood for that big of a downer ending when I started reading it
Anonymous
2/4/17, 9:25 PM
You're writing isn't bad the original story was just OK to begin with. It's hard to fix that without changing a lot of things.
Anonymous
2/4/17, 9:16 PM
the things you mentioned are pure fantasy. unhealthy lifestyle choices like overeating, excessive drinking, and partaking in marijuana are very real issues and they have the potential to be very dangerous They should not be fetishized or glorified.
Anonymous
2/4/17, 7:43 PM
Let's see, you're on a site that glorifies mind control, twinkification, revenge porn, muscle growth, and yet cursing someone into becoming fat is where you draw the line? Perspective