Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/5/17, 6:02 AM
SO HOT! I love dumbing down stories, and this one is especially good, you've made one of best descriptions of a smart guy becoming a moron. Very, very HOT! You've said this was going to be the last chapter, but the final part of the chapter sounds like there could be another one. Do you plan to add another instalment? I would like to know what Calvin will do with all those apps and to read more of how the dumb fag slut is humiliated and ridiculed.
Reddywhp
2/5/17, 6:02 AM
Fucking well done.
2/5/17, 4:32 AM
I really like the voice of narrator - he's so excited by the events around them and doesn't stop and analyze them. Really fun story! Thank you!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 3:22 AM
Great!!!
Anonymous
2/5/17, 2:56 AM
Don't be that guy 😐
Anonymous
2/5/17, 12:21 AM
Man in Pink. A new gay superhero? :0)
fan
2/4/17, 11:00 PM
congratulations to writing this story! I like this a lot! You write good, and personally like how Mark identifies as I bottom. This site needs more bottom protagonists! keep it up and keep writing, okay?
alx62
2/4/17, 10:36 PM
absolutely brilliant mmm had me twitching and so horny look forward to more
Anonymous
2/4/17, 9:32 PM
Yeah as Wesley said my problem was that the awfulness of his punishment felt like a left hook. It's a hot story don't get me wrong but I really wasn't ready or in the mood for that big of a downer ending when I started reading it
Anonymous
2/4/17, 9:25 PM
You're writing isn't bad the original story was just OK to begin with. It's hard to fix that without changing a lot of things.