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2/3/17, 10:37 PM
Ha, from the comments I thought this was going to be waaaayyyy worse than it actually is! This is why I don't post stuff on this site anymore. It's a very good story, but I think the issues that people are having with it come from some genre wires getting crossed. The story starts out pointing in the direction of a comic development--in the Greek sense--a story with a comeuppance, but always a happy ending of sorts. Just reading that intro/setup, you're expecting him to suffer some abuse, but come out of it with broader empathy and probably a hot roommate to fuck around with. It keeps this tone until about halfway through, when it just goes full tragedy, with no offer of redemption for Taylor at all. I don't think this is a "wrong" choice, but I think if you had telegraphed the horror of the ending a bit better, it wouldn't have felt so jarring. For example, if Taylor, at the beginning of the story, had been a closeted gay guy, who joined in with his straight bro friends in crashing the protest--but Sam recognized something about him from a profile on Grindr--a tattoo say--it would have been set up as a revenge trope, and the horror and tragedy of the ending would have "fit" better. It's about managing reader expectations, in a sense. All that said, I think what you have here is much, much more interesting than that example. It reminds me of this odd branch of an interactive over on CYOC, where a curse causes gay guys to become stereotypical, "straight", homophobic men, whenever they become horny. It feels really wrong, in some sense, but there's an attraction in that wrongness that I think deserves to be explored. I think your instincts here are really on point, but it needed a bit more finesse to pull off.
Anonymous
2/3/17, 10:20 PM
You should be happy that your stories always elicit such a response. While not all your stories are my favourite ( the ones without gay content ) I found this one to be quite sexy albeit in a sadistic kind of way.
Ryder
2/3/17, 10:15 PM
The story was great. The people complaining are the same snowflakes that would be the ones complaining thst a gay guy doesn't protest with other gay guys. Get over it, the tf was hot, it hit all the right buttons (for me at least) and the writing was superb. Keep it up, don't ever let the fragile minds of some readers discourage you from creating =)
2/3/17, 10:14 PM
Lovely story! I generally don't like the bullying in stories on this site because it's gratuitous, but here it was wonderful because it presumably taught Taylor a lesson, and because of what's going on in the U.S. where many of us have a fear of what happens when certain politicians get power. I just wished you had an epilogue with Sam messaging Taylor once again and seeing if he reacted differently. :)
Tox
2/3/17, 10:09 PM
Fucking loved it! Honestly, my real hot point is men being forced into a mindset they wouldn't normally take, especially if it's a nice guy being made aggressive and domineering! Really missed your works on here and can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/3/17, 9:22 PM
Please don't quit writing, while I did think the ending could change, not that it was bad just different, having anything where the jock is turned into a twinks is incredibly hot for me, more so if they start out straight. (One thing I wish it had was armpit licking/sniffing though)
Anonymous
2/3/17, 9:20 PM
Man, you're living in Austin. I'm from there. You liking it so far?
Anonymous
2/3/17, 9:00 PM
You're an imaginative and skilful writer but I found this story cruel without any particular purpose- and yes lots of other stories on here are cruel but my gut seems to be able to sort it out. Do you protest or not every time? People do politics in different ways and relating decently to straight people is arguably one of those modes. Looking forward to the next one from you but this felt unmotivated
Anonymous
2/3/17, 8:46 PM
This schlock made me glad I voted for trump. #MakeEroticaGreatAgain
Anonymous
2/3/17, 8:13 PM
This story see s to be about punishment for it's own sake. Eh