Recent Comments

Tox
2/3/17, 10:09 PM
Fucking loved it! Honestly, my real hot point is men being forced into a mindset they wouldn't normally take, especially if it's a nice guy being made aggressive and domineering! Really missed your works on here and can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/3/17, 9:22 PM
Please don't quit writing, while I did think the ending could change, not that it was bad just different, having anything where the jock is turned into a twinks is incredibly hot for me, more so if they start out straight. (One thing I wish it had was armpit licking/sniffing though)
Anonymous
2/3/17, 9:20 PM
Man, you're living in Austin. I'm from there. You liking it so far?
Anonymous
2/3/17, 9:00 PM
You're an imaginative and skilful writer but I found this story cruel without any particular purpose- and yes lots of other stories on here are cruel but my gut seems to be able to sort it out. Do you protest or not every time? People do politics in different ways and relating decently to straight people is arguably one of those modes. Looking forward to the next one from you but this felt unmotivated
Anonymous
2/3/17, 8:46 PM
This schlock made me glad I voted for trump. #MakeEroticaGreatAgain
Anonymous
2/3/17, 8:13 PM
This story see s to be about punishment for it's own sake. Eh
Anonymous
2/3/17, 7:37 PM
My thing is not political correctness, but that Zack was turned into a homophobe for no other reason than Sam's desire to punish a gay guy who wouldn't recognize the merits of protesting for something. Yes, people need to step out of their bubbles, but destroying a bro-relationship and in the outcome making a non-homophobic character homophobic does feel weird. That's what made it extra weird for me. The writing was good. Don't take it as a sign you should stop writing. Do continue. I like your stories.
Anonymous
2/3/17, 6:50 PM
I really don't see a difference between this story and any other story on this site. You want political correctness go watch cnn. This is mind control site, it's not always pretty. There is one particular story on this site about a bully making other people into bullies or worthless slaves....and yet those same readers who raved and still beg for a continuation of that story, are saying this story is too dark? Really? This story was great, I got off, and I'm sure others will too.
Anonymous
2/3/17, 5:52 PM
Good start. Can't wait for more
xORRiNx
2/3/17, 5:35 PM
I hear all the criticism... I probably should have tweaked components to this story to fix logistics. I maintain that this story has an audience... It's a specific fetish that I KNOW people out there have. Not rape... More so verbal abuse and straight cock fantasies. (real life roleplaying is something Ive explored in this sense)