Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/1/17, 5:38 AM
Absman, glad to learn you back. Hope, one day, you'll revisit a classic book nerd to football jock transformation tale. Missing old days : )
Mutabear
2/1/17, 5:22 AM
This is great. I'd love to see what a jockstrap across Logan's face might do.
2/1/17, 4:53 AM
Hey guys, I just wanted to say sorry for the long wait for this chapter. I was out of town and was writing on my phone exclusively. I have ideas for later chapters but this one was sort of an in-between with less plot movement. Kink is in the future. If you have any objections or approval of this, please don't hesitate to tell me.
2/1/17, 3:47 AM
So nice to have a sweet story—it leaves a big smile on my face. Thanks so much for this. :)
Anonymous
2/1/17, 2:25 AM
It was a good series to read but it felt like it was written by a completely different person. The use of language was different and it didn't flow as well as Hypnothrill stories tend to. A slight disappointment but only because you consistently raise our expectations with exceptional work :)
Anonymous
2/1/17, 2:04 AM
I thought it was less your writing and more that the original was just kinda meh. The build up was confusing and drawn out and the action was the last few sentences.
Anonymous
2/1/17, 12:03 AM
Good story! I agree with the previous comment, I'm glad to see a happy ending. Would be great to read more of the myserious Man in Pink, maybe he could visit the Comic Book expo or a Computer Fair. Also, I would like to know what happened with James, and how he's dealing with his new life.
Anonymous
1/31/17, 11:20 PM
Great story, would love to see this backfire on Andrew and have him forced to play somehow as well, but that's just me. Looking forward to future chapters!!
tomozco
1/31/17, 10:58 PM
Nice adaptation, Hypnothrill! Perhaps it was just because "New in Town" was just so overly popular that this one seemed quiet, but I certainly enjoyed it too! I've been refraining from reading the original so as not to spoil the fun of your version, sure you didn't disappoint (again!). I highly recommend you posting the follow up as well.
Anonymous
1/31/17, 8:14 PM
Oh Yessir! That was great, this site needs more content like this. Good job!