Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/1/17, 12:03 AM
Good story! I agree with the previous comment, I'm glad to see a happy ending. Would be great to read more of the myserious Man in Pink, maybe he could visit the Comic Book expo or a Computer Fair. Also, I would like to know what happened with James, and how he's dealing with his new life.
Anonymous
1/31/17, 11:20 PM
Great story, would love to see this backfire on Andrew and have him forced to play somehow as well, but that's just me. Looking forward to future chapters!!
tomozco
1/31/17, 10:58 PM
Nice adaptation, Hypnothrill! Perhaps it was just because "New in Town" was just so overly popular that this one seemed quiet, but I certainly enjoyed it too! I've been refraining from reading the original so as not to spoil the fun of your version, sure you didn't disappoint (again!). I highly recommend you posting the follow up as well.
Anonymous
1/31/17, 8:14 PM
Oh Yessir! That was great, this site needs more content like this. Good job!
Anonymous
1/31/17, 6:28 PM
Very good story. I'm kinda glad that it had a happy ending. Too many gloomy revenge stories on here lately.
Amalianetwork
1/31/17, 6:11 PM
Love me some nerdy muscle. Great first story. I hope many more will follow.
Anonymous
1/31/17, 4:57 PM
Great story...thanks
Anonymous
1/31/17, 4:49 PM
So is there a magic involved, or Hoss is magic...
TimNJ
1/31/17, 4:11 PM
Once again you bring a dimension to the story that is clever and so frigging hot!!!!!
LongtimeFan
1/31/17, 2:54 PM
Nice conclusion! Always eager to read your work, Hypnothrill--as long as you're posting, you'll have at least one loyal follower (wait...).