Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/31/17, 1:12 AM
You don't need an editor.... you need a writer that can take this "idea" and expand it into something resembling an actual story. Someone who can fill in the details, and make it interesting.
Anonymous
1/31/17, 12:00 AM
This had a twist that I did not expect. I had to go back tor read the story. Then, I found the moment where Jason could have overheard Kyle's induction. Sex was hot. Loved it. I usually don't look at the pics, but the pic depicting Jason is smokin' hot.
Anonymous
1/30/17, 11:57 PM
Very clever. Loved it.
Anonymous
1/30/17, 11:55 PM
Yes. You need an editor. This was awful.
Anonymous
1/30/17, 10:50 PM
yessir
alx62
1/30/17, 8:46 PM
look forward to next instalment
Anonymous
1/30/17, 8:39 PM
YESSIR! Great story! very, very hot, and I like the way you chose to tell it.
UchihaDEMS
1/30/17, 6:54 PM
I get the idea to keep it short but it was too little of control or induction, not even on commands we can appreciate it. Also, what does it have to do nanites with the hypno gun?
Anonymous
1/30/17, 4:14 PM
He never changes underwear since then???
Jan 29, 2017
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1/30/17, 1:26 PM
Excellent story. loved reading it and responding to it