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Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
1/29/17, 8:16 PM
Loved it, guessed what was coming but by then so was I
Anonymous
1/29/17, 4:39 PM
Great to have you back writing as you've always been one of my favorites!
barrydillon80@gmail.com
1/29/17, 4:28 PM
I'd say just keep following your instincts, you are doing a great job! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Anonymous
1/29/17, 3:39 PM
Great to have you back. It would be fun to have Toby get prettier as well as big so he would be a better more perfect boy for goldy.
Anonymous
1/29/17, 3:07 PM
I love your exploration of addiction in your old stories.
Anonymous
1/29/17, 3:05 PM
Great to have you back man. i always go back to some of you're old work, cant wait for more!
Absman420
1/29/17, 2:46 PM
Haha! At first I wasn't sure what to do with Goldy. I wondered if maybe I'd make him oblivious to Toby, just focused on football, so Toby would be sort of a tool of Goldy's needs. But I liked the dialogue in the last scene, so I went with it.
Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
1/29/17, 2:37 PM
Excellent
Anonymous
1/29/17, 2:20 PM
Excellent story! Any chance of a role reversal? Goldy would make Toby a hotbottom.
Anonymous
1/29/17, 2:10 PM
Fuck, that's so hot! I'd love to see more of the coworkers getting changed. Maybe the owner of the fast food joint being turned into a fat, redneck daddy!