Recent Comments

Absman420
1/30/17, 12:20 AM
I think Goldy was indeed under the Coach's influence. Remember, he said he'd won the lucky jock the year before and when the coach gives him orders, he immediately obeys.
Anonymous
1/29/17, 11:50 PM
Glad you come back!! Was Goldy under the influence of Coach? You are such an amazing writer, offering a great universe to explore.
Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
1/29/17, 8:16 PM
Loved it, guessed what was coming but by then so was I
Anonymous
1/29/17, 4:39 PM
Great to have you back writing as you've always been one of my favorites!
barrydillon80@gmail.com
1/29/17, 4:28 PM
I'd say just keep following your instincts, you are doing a great job! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Anonymous
1/29/17, 3:39 PM
Great to have you back. It would be fun to have Toby get prettier as well as big so he would be a better more perfect boy for goldy.
Anonymous
1/29/17, 3:07 PM
I love your exploration of addiction in your old stories.
Anonymous
1/29/17, 3:05 PM
Great to have you back man. i always go back to some of you're old work, cant wait for more!
Absman420
1/29/17, 2:46 PM
Haha! At first I wasn't sure what to do with Goldy. I wondered if maybe I'd make him oblivious to Toby, just focused on football, so Toby would be sort of a tool of Goldy's needs. But I liked the dialogue in the last scene, so I went with it.
Jan 29, 2017
Anonymous
1/29/17, 2:37 PM
Excellent