Recent Comments

1/24/17, 3:46 AM
Hey guys. Just want to thank you for the comments. This is my first attempt at a serious creative writing piece. I'm happy to receive any criticisms you have. I know I really struggled with over use of their names/pronouns. Tried my best to make it flow logically and clearly.
Anonymous
1/24/17, 3:19 AM
amazing
Anonymous
1/24/17, 2:45 AM
Great concept! Looking forward to reading more
Anonymous
1/24/17, 1:49 AM
Great story! I always love the story with a happy/starting relationship ending. It would be better if your story can be longer and with more conflicting involved. BTW,English is my second language either.
Anonymous
1/24/17, 1:36 AM
Same,i usually dont ship people on this site because i mainly come here to get off and most of my ships end up at the bottom of the sea but this is a story i read for the plot, The perfect mix qould be like edlam's reeducator With a great mix of sex and plot
Anonymous
1/24/17, 1:20 AM
Great story!I ship scotty&Todd.
Anonymous
1/24/17, 1:20 AM
Hmm it seems like our linely protagonist is repeating old mistakes,hes atill,despite his new sexy appearrance,trying to go after his future wife,interesting,i hope there isnt a time limit on his little time travel escapade or he'll end up back where he was in the future,repressed and sad
Anonymous
1/24/17, 12:47 AM
I liked the story as is with Nathan getting the man of his dreams in the end. I would have preferred for Nathan to have fucked Brenden; however, the rim job and felching was hot. Don't worry about adding conflict and the other stuff. Your straight forward style was excellent and an enjoyable read. It gave me a stiffy!
1/23/17, 10:46 PM
Wouldn't surprise me if Kevin was gay but hiding it by acting homophobic. It's great to see more of this!
Anonymous
1/23/17, 10:30 PM
Cool! I like the premise of this story. I would have liked to take the trip that Scott had! Experiencing college as a fit and uninhibited 21-year-old. I look forward to the next part.