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Anonymous
1/23/17, 12:17 AM
We know it's Matt because he introduced himself the previous time...
1/22/17, 11:39 PM
Please continue!
1/22/17, 11:35 PM
Please continue this!
cutlerfan
1/22/17, 11:32 PM
Great Story! I need some of those nanobots!
Anonymous
1/22/17, 10:20 PM
Off to a good start, and then came the armpits. To each his own as they say, and the bulk was a good classic barber seduction.
Anonymous
1/22/17, 10:16 PM
and we know this is Matt how? But it is building nicely
Anonymous
1/22/17, 10:11 PM
Nice one---once I got passed the armpits. But to each his own.
Anonymous
1/22/17, 7:09 PM
You gotta finish this one, please.
lipsk
1/22/17, 5:16 PM
Any chance of the skinhead Mark sequel?
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
1/22/17, 5:12 PM
I think your English is very good! However, in my opinion, the story would be hotter if it had more conflict. You do a good job of setting up the situation with Nathan and Brendan, but then Nathan is able to get exactly what he desires, instantaneously. Personally, I'd prefer a story where Brendan initially resists the nanobots. Or a story where the nanobots don't work precisely as Nathan planned. Or a story where Brendan finds out about the nanobots and decides to use them on Nathan. But of course, these are just suggestions. You should keep writing what turns you on!