Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/22/17, 10:11 PM
Nice one---once I got passed the armpits. But to each his own.
Anonymous
1/22/17, 7:09 PM
You gotta finish this one, please.
lipsk
1/22/17, 5:16 PM
Any chance of the skinhead Mark sequel?
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
1/22/17, 5:12 PM
I think your English is very good! However, in my opinion, the story would be hotter if it had more conflict. You do a good job of setting up the situation with Nathan and Brendan, but then Nathan is able to get exactly what he desires, instantaneously. Personally, I'd prefer a story where Brendan initially resists the nanobots. Or a story where the nanobots don't work precisely as Nathan planned. Or a story where Brendan finds out about the nanobots and decides to use them on Nathan. But of course, these are just suggestions. You should keep writing what turns you on!
1/22/17, 3:57 PM
Thank you for the ideas! Very much appreciated. I hope you enjoy the next few chapters too. About the strength thing, it was Jeff just going along with what Nick wanted to do. He just let himself be guided so there wasn't much strength needed to do that. I'll try to make a few edits to make it apparent, thanks for catching that :)
Anonymous
1/22/17, 9:29 AM
I'm honestly disappointed that Ollie didn't take to the reprogramming of finding pleasure in corrupting Charlie to make him at least willing if not actively happy to, without needed supervision, inject and turn more officers, or even further corrupt charlie to be more in line with the company's desires. Wasted potential in my opinion.
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
1/22/17, 3:57 AM
Yes you must keep this story going dad must witness his sons conversion to masters personal slave
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
1/22/17, 3:32 AM
Aw man my boner loved this!
Anonymous
1/21/17, 10:30 PM
This is one of the best stories I've read on this site... and I've read plenty... awesome! Made me blow my load lol :P but in all seriousness, very hot, very well written and the concept is HOT!!! :) I'd love to see more work (esp if it's similar to this)
Anonymous
1/21/17, 8:18 PM
I was referring to the author, who I consider one of if not the best to be found on this site and who's stories I usually enjoy very much, in this particular series flirting a little bit too much for my taste with judgments of good and evil. He hasn't done that yet, but as I said he does keep toying with it. For me...for me...that detracts from good porn.