Any chance of the skinhead Mark sequel?

I think your English is very good! However, in my opinion, the story would be hotter if it had more conflict. You do a good job of setting up the situation with Nathan and Brendan, but then Nathan is able to get exactly what he desires, instantaneously. Personally, I'd prefer a story where Brendan initially resists the nanobots. Or a story where the nanobots don't work precisely as Nathan planned. Or a story where Brendan finds out about the nanobots and decides to use them on Nathan. But of course, these are just suggestions. You should keep writing what turns you on!

Thank you for the ideas! Very much appreciated. I hope you enjoy the next few chapters too. About the strength thing, it was Jeff just going along with what Nick wanted to do. He just let himself be guided so there wasn't much strength needed to do that. I'll try to make a few edits to make it apparent, thanks for catching that :)

I'm honestly disappointed that Ollie didn't take to the reprogramming of finding pleasure in corrupting Charlie to make him at least willing if not actively happy to, without needed supervision, inject and turn more officers, or even further corrupt charlie to be more in line with the company's desires. Wasted potential in my opinion.

Yes you must keep this story going dad must witness his sons conversion to masters personal slave

Aw man my boner loved this!

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site... and I've read plenty... awesome! Made me blow my load lol :P but in all seriousness, very hot, very well written and the concept is HOT!!! :) I'd love to see more work (esp if it's similar to this)

I was referring to the author, who I consider one of if not the best to be found on this site and who's stories I usually enjoy very much, in this particular series flirting a little bit too much for my taste with judgments of good and evil. He hasn't done that yet, but as I said he does keep toying with it. For me...for me...that detracts from good porn.

Great story. Hope to see more like this.

Fantastic story! I am amazed that this is your first; and I really hope it is just one of many more to come. The biggest complement that I can give you is that you are making me like things that I usually hate. Normally, I am totally turned off by stories with incest, but I like it here. The dad is oblivious to Nick's distress. His actions are done with love (and lust), but Nick just gets shame and confusion. It is so devious! Normally, I want love to prevail. I'd want Nick to have a short struggle with his feelings, fall in love with Jeff on his own, and have them both escape...I still want love to win out in the end, but I want the journey to be darker than I'd normally like (which is totally hot). I hope that this story will not conclude too soon, as Nick has a lot more learning to do before he makes up for all his homophobia. I normally don't suggest directions for stories, but you could do some great things in a scenario where Nick continues to fall in love with Jeff on his own, where they are close to having an escape plan and running away just to have Lee give the command to Jeff that he doesn't love Nick. Nick would then be thrust into the dilemma of running away and losing Jeff or staying and trying to win Jeff back. Lee would have tremendous leverage over Nick without needing the nanites at this point. Nick could return Jeff to normal by using the anti-nanites, but assuming there are only enough for one person, he'd have to sacrifice his own freedom to save Jeff. So many places you can go with both mental torture and humiliation. Question: Nick is supposed to have the strength of a 3-year old, but there are several mentions of him overpowering Jeff in this chapter. Was this just a small continuity error or does Jeff also only have the strength of a 3-year old? Sorry if the question makes it seem like I am being overly critical; I honestly just want to know if it was intentional or accidental. I could totally see Lee putting Jeff at Nick's strength level or giving Nick full strength when dealing with Jeff, just to mess with his head :)