Great story. Hope to see more like this.

Fantastic story! I am amazed that this is your first; and I really hope it is just one of many more to come. The biggest complement that I can give you is that you are making me like things that I usually hate. Normally, I am totally turned off by stories with incest, but I like it here. The dad is oblivious to Nick's distress. His actions are done with love (and lust), but Nick just gets shame and confusion. It is so devious! Normally, I want love to prevail. I'd want Nick to have a short struggle with his feelings, fall in love with Jeff on his own, and have them both escape...I still want love to win out in the end, but I want the journey to be darker than I'd normally like (which is totally hot). I hope that this story will not conclude too soon, as Nick has a lot more learning to do before he makes up for all his homophobia. I normally don't suggest directions for stories, but you could do some great things in a scenario where Nick continues to fall in love with Jeff on his own, where they are close to having an escape plan and running away just to have Lee give the command to Jeff that he doesn't love Nick. Nick would then be thrust into the dilemma of running away and losing Jeff or staying and trying to win Jeff back. Lee would have tremendous leverage over Nick without needing the nanites at this point. Nick could return Jeff to normal by using the anti-nanites, but assuming there are only enough for one person, he'd have to sacrifice his own freedom to save Jeff. So many places you can go with both mental torture and humiliation. Question: Nick is supposed to have the strength of a 3-year old, but there are several mentions of him overpowering Jeff in this chapter. Was this just a small continuity error or does Jeff also only have the strength of a 3-year old? Sorry if the question makes it seem like I am being overly critical; I honestly just want to know if it was intentional or accidental. I could totally see Lee putting Jeff at Nick's strength level or giving Nick full strength when dealing with Jeff, just to mess with his head :)

I didn't think they got far enough for the condom conversation. Trust me, I'm keeping that factor in mind.

I'm really enjoying this story. There are a lot of little touches that keep me in the story, and the main character is insanely likeable before and after the whiskey. I'm looking forward to see where this goes. (But if someone wants sex and he doesnt demand protection because of AIDS, i call bull on it being 1987 :-P)

I'm not sure what the previous comment refers to. The story spoke to me.

wish there was a sequel to this...

This is all beginning to tiptoe too delicately along a line I don't like.

Really enjoyed this one! Thanks!

What a delicious story! Oh, man, there's so many good things to say about this story...what a hot job! Please, write a full story like the porn movie you described here, something about a handsome straight cowboy turned gay by a sheriff, with all the hot details and clueless transformation that you do so well.

Yes I hope he ends up married to a rich muscle stud!