Recent Comments

1/20/17, 6:43 AM
That was an absolutely amazing story, well done! I'd love to see a followup with some new victims. Or perhaps where Dr Colson revisits the restaurant where Harry, Johnny and Zeiss are working and has some more fun.
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
1/20/17, 5:23 AM
Since this is a mass mind control wud there be a mass orgy in future chapters?
1/20/17, 5:05 AM
Hello! Sorry...I just haven't been in the right mood lately...been severely over-worked and pooped about 90% of my time. Still gonna work on it and still gonna get it out. But, like before, I want to release it when I'm completely happy with it :)
Anonymous
1/20/17, 4:34 AM
It's hit or miss with your stories. This was a hit!! Great twists and hot sex!!
Anonymous
1/20/17, 4:01 AM
More on him taking care of Jimmy & The lawyer would be interesting.
1/20/17, 3:57 AM
Heheh....very nice! I like that you made Zeiss too cocky at the outset, so that his takeover seems like a well-deserved act of retribution. Good going!
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
1/20/17, 3:52 AM
I like how the master just disregards the old lives and futures of the slaves like ryan who was planning to go to college and just reassigns him an entirely new future.it just goes to show how much control he has and how helpless these men are. Its probably a long shot but I hope you write more...
Anonymous
1/20/17, 3:25 AM
Definitely hope you continue this - as much as I love your Early Present series, this is amazing!
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
1/19/17, 10:51 PM
Great story...so hot!!! Love the mass mind altering control and how the Master just randomly reassigns the father and son and pair them up with complete strangers. Please keep it going!
1/19/17, 9:19 PM
Thanks for the story. A good start. Dont take the nasty comment to seriously. A bit of editing yes, but a good start. For the guy who said "Dont bother" let us know where your stories are so we can bask in your literary talents. keep writing a good concept.