Recent Comments

1/19/17, 12:37 AM
It turns me on knowing it turns you on haha
Anonymous
1/18/17, 11:54 PM
Hot hot! Shame about Mr. Zeiss though...
Anonymous
1/18/17, 10:48 PM
I cant wait for part 2
AeonFlux
1/18/17, 10:31 PM
Would love to read a second part......... made me hard all the way through reading......perfect
Jan 18, 2017
tomozco
1/18/17, 10:09 PM
Another excellent story about mass enslavement! Hopefully there could be a few more episodes of what happens in town...
Anonymous
1/18/17, 9:57 PM
More of this please!!
cutlerfan
1/18/17, 8:56 PM
I hope Steve is taken down. Good plot and descriptions!
Anonymous
1/18/17, 7:12 PM
I liked it, and I love your writing style. Although I agree that it doesn't seem the end of the story... I get the feeling that the story isn't finish and the last enslavement I have liked but it hasn't been apotheosic. Also, I missed seeing the story from the point of view of one of the dron guys. Even so it is a very interesting chapter that I have enjoyed. Although I hope someday you will decide to make a sequel.
Anonymous
1/18/17, 4:25 PM
The first part is always the best;-)
Jan 18, 2017
Anonymous
1/18/17, 4:18 PM
Great story!!!