Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/17/17, 1:52 AM
Hot, but predictable. You should add policemen and soldiers.
Willie Cici
1/17/17, 1:45 AM
Thanks for the comment and question. Prince plays a role in the first story. He is an automaton. He has the "electromagnetic" conversion capability. Mullen used Prince to acquire new merchandise. His life-like feel is the lure.
Chris
1/17/17, 12:32 AM
Can't what for Lee and Nick to have their father son conversation. That should be hot and loving the direction it's going.
love3mbig
1/17/17, 12:11 AM
this is a fkkn hot story! thanks for writing it!! It needs a bit of editing for spelling and grammar, but the overall story is awesome!
Anonymous
1/16/17, 10:58 PM
Awesome story. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
1/16/17, 4:14 PM
Damn Good! Nearly gave me an unauthorized, hands-free nutting.
Colton haynes
1/16/17, 11:19 AM
Prediction- By the time this story ends he would've fucked the whole college...
Anonymous
1/16/17, 11:13 AM
I hope justin survives from your craziness
1/16/17, 1:37 AM
To the broken record; your criticism is always the same "Spell Check! Grammar Check! Edit!" regardless of the story. Contrary to what you may think, no one is benefiting from your "advice". The most useful comments mention specifics that the author can actually use to improve his writing. Things like "try harder" and "be creative" are throw away comments that you could tell anyone. Oh, and I count 5 grammatical and spelling errors in your short comment above. Specifically: 1) "Broken record" in the first sentence should have a comma after it. 2) "When don't you even" ... You really should have taken some time to re-read and edit this one. 3) "Why should I invest my time" sentence should end in a question mark. 4) It's spelled substance, not "subsance". 5) I doubt you meant to say he'll get the "hand" of it.
Anonymous
1/16/17, 12:18 AM
Write anything you wish to write, good sir, I love the story as it is! I enjoy how you add the emotional conflicts for Nick, it's a good pace management. The part I like the most about your story is how Lee uses dad for various kinds of buffoonery. Seeing a daddy/older/authoritative person changing from proper to sordid and self-humilitating is a huge turn on for me.