Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/16/17, 10:58 PM
Awesome story. Please keep writing.
Anonymous
1/16/17, 4:14 PM
Damn Good! Nearly gave me an unauthorized, hands-free nutting.
Colton haynes
1/16/17, 11:19 AM
Prediction- By the time this story ends he would've fucked the whole college...
Anonymous
1/16/17, 11:13 AM
I hope justin survives from your craziness
1/16/17, 1:37 AM
To the broken record; your criticism is always the same "Spell Check! Grammar Check! Edit!" regardless of the story. Contrary to what you may think, no one is benefiting from your "advice". The most useful comments mention specifics that the author can actually use to improve his writing. Things like "try harder" and "be creative" are throw away comments that you could tell anyone. Oh, and I count 5 grammatical and spelling errors in your short comment above. Specifically: 1) "Broken record" in the first sentence should have a comma after it. 2) "When don't you even" ... You really should have taken some time to re-read and edit this one. 3) "Why should I invest my time" sentence should end in a question mark. 4) It's spelled substance, not "subsance". 5) I doubt you meant to say he'll get the "hand" of it.
Anonymous
1/16/17, 12:18 AM
Write anything you wish to write, good sir, I love the story as it is! I enjoy how you add the emotional conflicts for Nick, it's a good pace management. The part I like the most about your story is how Lee uses dad for various kinds of buffoonery. Seeing a daddy/older/authoritative person changing from proper to sordid and self-humilitating is a huge turn on for me.
Anonymous
1/15/17, 10:36 PM
I finished the entire series and i must say its different in a good way. It may not have a lot of sex but it was still strangely so arousing
biguycnj
1/15/17, 7:05 PM
A very good job hypno keep up good writing I agree with nycboot that a little something about the conversion chambers would have been nice as with a bit more of role of alien boys but still great work I hope u do decide in future to write a follow up for this would love to find Captain Banks already is collared so to speak
Anonymous
1/15/17, 6:05 PM
amazing story... anyone know of part two?!?
Some foreign reader
1/15/17, 5:08 PM
Excellent! Very very hot! I look forward to the three people to have even more fun. Or flat jocks. I do not enjoy much about the appearance of policemen and soldiers.