Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/15/17, 12:57 AM
I liked mochael's conversion scene but i felt like tony's was a bit rushed and i was disappointed that we didnt see the master at all, nor did we have all the drones together or see how their life has been after their transformation. Overall i felt like this chapter wasnt an ending chapter at all as there were a lot of loose ends...
Kyle
1/15/17, 12:23 AM
Another excellent chapter. So many things going on. So enjoyable. And brilliantly written. The game didn't disappear this time. VERY interesting. Look forward to chapter 5. Thank you for writing such quality stories.
1/14/17, 11:08 PM
Wonderful story! Since you previously said that the chapter you most liked was chapter 2, I re-read that several times. But I think this chapter (chapter 6) is the best. Your writing experiments with different ways that the crew members have been taken over. I find this final take-over is the most arousing because of the wonderful details, and because you allow the reader to follow along by allowing them inside Tony's head. I'm only sorry we didn't get to see what it's like when one of the slaves is physically changed by the Master. :) Thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
1/14/17, 1:54 PM
HI there, would love to have more to this story! It's SOOOO good
Anonymous
1/14/17, 12:48 PM
Great story! Would like to see Nick used more and perhaps given to Matt as his personal slave/lover...and Jeff as Lee and the Dad's piss slave/doggie.
Anonymous
1/14/17, 6:10 AM
Hot ending! I love it when the bad guys win.
Anonymous
1/14/17, 5:46 AM
I agreed that I would like to see some more resistance, but it was also very exciting to see how Aiden almost voluntarily surrendered and then as Aiden was released and fell back giving himself up to the master only for the memory of pleasure. I really like hearing the internal monologue of the drones, I hope we see more of that, and maybe another guy released only to fall back.
Nov 28, 2016
Anonymous
1/13/17, 9:54 PM
Very much looking forward to part two. I just stumbled onto the other barakos stories and am hungry for more. 😀
Anonymous
1/13/17, 4:06 PM
No problem with the photos---especially the spandex in the prior story.
Anonymous
1/13/17, 1:13 PM
The 2 new guys should have at least blown you. Great stories! I look forward to your next chapter. :)