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1/15/17, 4:14 PM
Nice and hot! Great job for a first story!
Anonymous
1/15/17, 1:34 PM
Loved this series. Greest adaptation. So much potential for squeals - especially the role of the hunter. Thanks for sharing!
Cubwriter28
1/15/17, 12:37 PM
I loved this series! Well done. Conversion stories are always my favorite and the way each person was enslaved was very hot to read. I always enjoy both the self perspective and the perspective of someone watching someone else change. Thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
1/15/17, 10:35 AM
I always look forward to your stories rubbrsome. This one was no exception!
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
1/15/17, 5:13 AM
That's an interesting point. And the story does start with this announcement from the Captain who delivers the men to the planet: "So, no communication within the next 72 hours. We’ll come back and pick you up after that. Captain Banks out.” " Maybe if you guys are really good, I'll someday write an original sequel to this adapted story, showing what happens when the ship comes back for the men.
Anonymous
1/15/17, 12:57 AM
I liked mochael's conversion scene but i felt like tony's was a bit rushed and i was disappointed that we didnt see the master at all, nor did we have all the drones together or see how their life has been after their transformation. Overall i felt like this chapter wasnt an ending chapter at all as there were a lot of loose ends...
Kyle
1/15/17, 12:23 AM
Another excellent chapter. So many things going on. So enjoyable. And brilliantly written. The game didn't disappear this time. VERY interesting. Look forward to chapter 5. Thank you for writing such quality stories.
1/14/17, 11:08 PM
Wonderful story! Since you previously said that the chapter you most liked was chapter 2, I re-read that several times. But I think this chapter (chapter 6) is the best. Your writing experiments with different ways that the crew members have been taken over. I find this final take-over is the most arousing because of the wonderful details, and because you allow the reader to follow along by allowing them inside Tony's head. I'm only sorry we didn't get to see what it's like when one of the slaves is physically changed by the Master. :) Thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
1/14/17, 1:54 PM
HI there, would love to have more to this story! It's SOOOO good