Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/12/17, 8:38 PM
Great! The more hunks you are able to play with, the merrier! So! More hunks for the next chapter please! We need coaches, cops, soldiers, gangsters, bouncers ...
Anonymous
1/12/17, 4:53 PM
A cliff hanger! omg! Wait for more!
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:50 PM
Oh this is getting really good. I agree, it seems like there is a higher purpose for Deck. I'm excited to see what it it!
Anonymous
1/12/17, 1:21 PM
I love it, your story has made me fall in love. I think it's the best I've read in a long time. I really like the writing style you have, it's simple and clear but very descriptive. I love to see the internal monologue of the enslaved limbs, it seems to me something very exciting. I would like to see more of this. Also, the end of this chapter has excited me a lot, the like Aiden falls again only with entering his master's room. Overall, I was very happy that they released Aiden (who is my favorite character along with Alex and Evan) because that allowed him to consciously explain what it feels like to be under the power of the master. Will Tony and Michael try to free Aiden once more? He is the easiest way to find the other way out, right? Whether that happens or not, I would love to see a crew member released again just to see him fall again. And listen to Aiden's inner monologue while he's on his way to reunite with his master. Be that as it may, I love it. I can not wait for the next chapter! It is a pity that the next chapter will be the last. Q: Precisely one of the things I liked most about Aiden (apart from being young and Irish xD) is that he was the only one who has accepted more or less freely his conversion. Of course I like resistance, but Aiden has me in love.
Anonymous
1/12/17, 8:23 AM
always great work, loving this direction but would adore earlier continuations~
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
1/12/17, 7:00 AM
Yeah, I tend to agree with you. For me, Chapter 2 is also the hottest, precisely because it emphasizes the resistance of the crew. I'm only adapting the story for a gay male readership, so I haven't made any major changes to the original story's plot. But I think that these kinds of "Ten Little Indians" are challenging, because there are only so many ways you can vary the scene of seduction and conversion. One thing I love about "The Lost Cave," however, is how it keeps returning to the internal monologues of the converted crewmembers. I always find it really hot to get a glimpse of their "drone logic."
Ben
1/12/17, 5:29 AM
Hot damn!!! First story???? You must be a natural then!! (Typing with jizz covered hand) lol :p
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:38 AM
I think the concept of the series is great. I enjoy it when someone becomes a drone and i like how the readers can understand what goes through in their mind. However, i feel like there are some things that needs improvement. For one, the downfall of the crew seems to be waaay to easy and theres no resistance at all. I feel like the only real resistance was in chapter 2 with pavel, alex and darius, i enjoyed the struggles in that chapter but ever since then everyone just became a slave in an instant. Another thing that i feel is lacking is the sexual content, more so on the chapter 4 and 5. I wish there was more seduction, body teasing and just some overall man on man action. Anyway that was just my overall opinion and i hope you would tske it in consideration
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:31 AM
This is getting too hot and exciting!
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:15 AM
Unique concept - time travel/body transformation in real time while walking down the street! Well done, old chap, I say! A tip of the topper to you!