Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/12/17, 8:23 AM
always great work, loving this direction but would adore earlier continuations~
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
1/12/17, 7:00 AM
Yeah, I tend to agree with you. For me, Chapter 2 is also the hottest, precisely because it emphasizes the resistance of the crew. I'm only adapting the story for a gay male readership, so I haven't made any major changes to the original story's plot. But I think that these kinds of "Ten Little Indians" are challenging, because there are only so many ways you can vary the scene of seduction and conversion. One thing I love about "The Lost Cave," however, is how it keeps returning to the internal monologues of the converted crewmembers. I always find it really hot to get a glimpse of their "drone logic."
Ben
1/12/17, 5:29 AM
Hot damn!!! First story???? You must be a natural then!! (Typing with jizz covered hand) lol :p
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:38 AM
I think the concept of the series is great. I enjoy it when someone becomes a drone and i like how the readers can understand what goes through in their mind. However, i feel like there are some things that needs improvement. For one, the downfall of the crew seems to be waaay to easy and theres no resistance at all. I feel like the only real resistance was in chapter 2 with pavel, alex and darius, i enjoyed the struggles in that chapter but ever since then everyone just became a slave in an instant. Another thing that i feel is lacking is the sexual content, more so on the chapter 4 and 5. I wish there was more seduction, body teasing and just some overall man on man action. Anyway that was just my overall opinion and i hope you would tske it in consideration
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:31 AM
This is getting too hot and exciting!
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:15 AM
Unique concept - time travel/body transformation in real time while walking down the street! Well done, old chap, I say! A tip of the topper to you!
biguynj
1/12/17, 2:35 AM
Glad to see you revisit this story Willie as always I enjoyed it Hope I'm not offending but a back story how Prince became Prince would be nice . You have the knack for twisting it around
Anonymous
1/12/17, 1:46 AM
I love the Shakespear refference in the title :)
1/12/17, 12:32 AM
My bad, there'll be more :D
Stefan1984
1/11/17, 11:19 PM
It appears to me as if Deck has a higher calling ahead of him. Specially when I consider how quickly he managed to unify his crew. I wonder what will await him and his crew next.