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TheWanderer
1/11/17, 5:19 PM
Oh, cause you said "write another story" so I misunderstood :-p
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
1/11/17, 1:45 PM
Rubbrsome, I thought the first couple of chapters of "The Alignment" were some of your best work (right up there with "Brain Feed" and this story). I loved how it was gesturing toward a worldwide invasion, and that sense of scale was something that got lost in the later chapters. So if you're daunted by a rewrite, I'd suggest just writing another story in the "Alignment" universe, maybe set in the early days of the invasion. IMO, your most erotic passages come when you describe the Aligned interacting with the general public, brainwashing and ultimately converting some of them.
1/11/17, 1:11 PM
To nycboot: Thank you for the very generous words. I think my face is burning red at the moment. I really try to make my stories entertaining for all you guys. But sometimes I don't think I succeed. I do wonder if I go on autopilot, it get repetitive. But that's just me being critical of myself. Which I don't mind. It makes me strive to improve rather than become complacent. It's funny you mention The Alignment. I really want to get back to that story. But if I do, expect it to be a bit of an overhaul. I'd probably start over and tweak things from the beginning. I just don't feel I can pick up where I left off. So that's what's holding me up. Knowing that I have to do a rewrite feels daunting.
1/11/17, 11:29 AM
Oh no, there's more, I just got sick. Will post soon.
TheWanderer
1/11/17, 10:25 AM
Oh, is this supposed to be the final chapter?
1/11/17, 7:22 AM
The tips are definitely helping, I'm working on the next one and I am putting in a couple of things you will enjoy. Again thanks and as soon as i am done with the next one you will know. Cheers!!!
Anonymous
1/11/17, 6:08 AM
Getting hotter and hotter with each installment. Loving it!!!
Willie Cici
1/11/17, 6:07 AM
If I could only attach sound to these stories . . . Nessun Dorma.
Anonymous
1/11/17, 6:06 AM
Incredible series. So hot!!
1/11/17, 4:15 AM
By now, we, your fans know full well your fetishes for black rubber, encasement, loss of control, drones, etc. But the fetish that doesn't often get aired in your stories is what you sought to achieve in "The Alignment" and also that beautiful end for "The Conscript." So it's nice to see it here back in action. Your stories are so amazing... They are never formulaic with regards to plot or with regards to your writing style. You don't ever go on "autopilot" and just describe things in an ordinary way. Instead you find the language to fit the situation in a unique manner so that your prose never comes out ordinary but has this amazing power and tension to it. Just virtuosic and stupendous...