Recent Comments

Ben
1/12/17, 5:29 AM
Hot damn!!! First story???? You must be a natural then!! (Typing with jizz covered hand) lol :p
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:38 AM
I think the concept of the series is great. I enjoy it when someone becomes a drone and i like how the readers can understand what goes through in their mind. However, i feel like there are some things that needs improvement. For one, the downfall of the crew seems to be waaay to easy and theres no resistance at all. I feel like the only real resistance was in chapter 2 with pavel, alex and darius, i enjoyed the struggles in that chapter but ever since then everyone just became a slave in an instant. Another thing that i feel is lacking is the sexual content, more so on the chapter 4 and 5. I wish there was more seduction, body teasing and just some overall man on man action. Anyway that was just my overall opinion and i hope you would tske it in consideration
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:31 AM
This is getting too hot and exciting!
Anonymous
1/12/17, 3:15 AM
Unique concept - time travel/body transformation in real time while walking down the street! Well done, old chap, I say! A tip of the topper to you!
biguynj
1/12/17, 2:35 AM
Glad to see you revisit this story Willie as always I enjoyed it Hope I'm not offending but a back story how Prince became Prince would be nice . You have the knack for twisting it around
Anonymous
1/12/17, 1:46 AM
I love the Shakespear refference in the title :)
1/12/17, 12:32 AM
My bad, there'll be more :D
Stefan1984
1/11/17, 11:19 PM
It appears to me as if Deck has a higher calling ahead of him. Specially when I consider how quickly he managed to unify his crew. I wonder what will await him and his crew next.
Anonymous
1/11/17, 8:50 PM
Can't wait for more!
1/11/17, 7:41 PM
To Hypnothrill: I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the beginning of the Alignment. Those are some of my favorite scenes ... when the delivery driver is going around and seeing the city's population being "aligned". And yes, I agree with you that something was lost in the middle of the story. But I know that the slow portion of the story is crucial. I cannot divulge too much because it would mean spoiling the ending. But I have to explain the methodology of The Aligned, what they do and how they do it ... because that middle part is me setting up those dominoes. And I was heading on a clear trajectory on where this story was going. But sadly, I was thrown off course when I got negative feedback regarding the incest subplot. I shouldn't have let negative feedback derail me but I did. But even now, I know that ending that I was heading toward. And I still love it. I want that ending. And that ending is why this story hasn't gone away in my thoughts. I will eventually finish it. However, I will probably post the story in its entirety because I'm not going to let any feedback throw me off this time. When it posts .... expect a massive story.