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1/9/17, 11:48 PM
It's stories, like these, that makes me really desire to be taken and programmed as a drone. If only this could be real.
1/9/17, 11:14 PM
For Stefan: Thanks for the proofread!!! Not sure how I made that error. Must've happened when I copy/pasted something. But I edited and corrected the error. Thanks so much. As a reward: 011001110110111101101111011001000010000001101110011011110111011100100000011100100110010101101100011000010111100000100000011000010110111001100100001000000110111101100010011001010111100100100000011000010110111001100100001000000110100001100001011100100110010001100101011011100010000001100001011011100110010000100000011000110111010101101101
Anonymous
1/9/17, 10:26 PM
Just keep on writing the story you want to write! Great work so far!
Anonymous
1/9/17, 8:13 PM
Great story!!! Made me cum everywhere!!!!
Anonymous
1/9/17, 7:22 PM
I like what you did to the dad. I think it's hot. For some reason tho the romance just kills the moment. Hopefully Nick doesn't get out from the nanites. I don't think Lee has dominated him himself yet tho. Thanks for this chapter !!
1/9/17, 6:08 PM
I do want to see Jeff and Nick as a real couple once this is all over but I'm enjoying even the sicker twists along the way...
Stefan1984
1/9/17, 5:06 PM
Great story so far. I can barely wait to read the next chapter. Alas there is a small setting error in the third paragraph. In the third sentence the word instead is interrupted by an off-hand(?) comment. I hope this error can be fixed, because otherwise it would mar this excellent story. I have highlighted the error to make it easier to find: Deck accepted these orders without hesitation. At that moment, Grey Crew came back to life. None of them palmed their lockers, but ins“The subject’s performance has been exceptional but expected. We both knew that he could easily turn the Mentor.” tead formed a line and readied to file out of their bunk room. Then one by one, each of them walked nakedly out of the room. Deck was permitted to follow, but was soon directed to the topside lift. He turned and watched Grey Crew proceed down a restricted passage and wait outside a reinforced airlock.
nycboot
1/9/17, 4:18 PM
Gads, just keeps getting better and better!
Hiro
1/9/17, 4:00 PM
It was good. But I think we all meant emotionless zombie Dad as in Jacob becomes an emotionless slave. Blank faced, stiff walking around with only the one goal he's been ordered to do. And then just stand like a robot when he is given no orders.
Anonymous
1/9/17, 7:15 AM
Whoa, I was not expecting that! Loved the use of binary code and the dream log!