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1/9/17, 6:08 PM
I do want to see Jeff and Nick as a real couple once this is all over but I'm enjoying even the sicker twists along the way...
Stefan1984
1/9/17, 5:06 PM
Great story so far. I can barely wait to read the next chapter. Alas there is a small setting error in the third paragraph. In the third sentence the word instead is interrupted by an off-hand(?) comment. I hope this error can be fixed, because otherwise it would mar this excellent story. I have highlighted the error to make it easier to find: Deck accepted these orders without hesitation. At that moment, Grey Crew came back to life. None of them palmed their lockers, but ins“The subject’s performance has been exceptional but expected. We both knew that he could easily turn the Mentor.” tead formed a line and readied to file out of their bunk room. Then one by one, each of them walked nakedly out of the room. Deck was permitted to follow, but was soon directed to the topside lift. He turned and watched Grey Crew proceed down a restricted passage and wait outside a reinforced airlock.
nycboot
1/9/17, 4:18 PM
Gads, just keeps getting better and better!
Hiro
1/9/17, 4:00 PM
It was good. But I think we all meant emotionless zombie Dad as in Jacob becomes an emotionless slave. Blank faced, stiff walking around with only the one goal he's been ordered to do. And then just stand like a robot when he is given no orders.
Anonymous
1/9/17, 7:15 AM
Whoa, I was not expecting that! Loved the use of binary code and the dream log!
Anonymous
1/9/17, 6:43 AM
I do hope you still plan to continue this texmandex. It's one of my favourite stories on this site.
Anonymous
1/9/17, 6:33 AM
OMG... could I... temp u to give a copy? plzzzz ^_^
Anonymous
1/9/17, 5:15 AM
Conform train obey conform train obey
Anonymous
1/9/17, 2:47 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
1/9/17, 1:01 AM
Awesome story and writing. Once again proving you're on of the best contributors here. Loving this story.