Recent Comments

1/8/17, 3:46 AM
You know I love your stories. Reading this one crystallized one reason: It's like you take the reader for a walk, then kidnap them into a car, then the car goes up a mountain, then you're transferred to a train, and then you rocket them into outer space. Fabulous so far!!!
huttonguy
1/8/17, 2:51 AM
i would love to have been in that position god it made me so horny
Anonymous
1/8/17, 2:35 AM
Ment Trent and his friend... damn, I put the wrong names in my previous comment, sorry.
Mr. Seth Atan
1/8/17, 2:33 AM
Thank you. Well I definitely know how it will end and believe me it will be a surprise, but still working on the middle parts to get it right.
UchihaDEMS
1/8/17, 2:32 AM
Since this is a story without super powers or something magical I would say that the story has so many flaws, from the dad to how Josh fell for the pocket watch... Anyway, I will just stick the main scene and hope to see Josh and his friends bottom, or at leas his dad :)
UchihaDEMS
1/8/17, 2:15 AM
An emotive chapter, I loved it. Though it was sad, its true, he deserve better. Having said that, a blank emotionless zombie dad would be awesome,any chance of a foot fetish?
1/8/17, 1:53 AM
Some odd grammar in places, but I loved the story regardless. Racial transformations are fun to read.
Mutabear
1/8/17, 1:32 AM
Still a top 5 on here.
Stefan1984
1/7/17, 11:46 PM
A good start, both well written and enticing. I hope there will be more parts to follow!
Anonymous
1/7/17, 11:34 PM
Love this! Not my fetish exactly but nothing I like better than young men being transformed and regressed into docile obedient gay boys of any kind.