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8/30/24, 2:19 PM
Wonderful story, very well paced. Looking forward to future sessions
8/30/24, 1:37 PM
I think it's bad when you can tell the story has used AI. If it's used as a starting point and the writer fills in the gaps, bulks out the descriptive phrases, cleans up the stilted and weird emotional tones of AI-gen stuff, then great. Completely valid use of AI especially for beginners. But if they just lazily throw a prompt in, poke it a few times and repackage it as 'Here's a thing I wrote' then they're not a writer and they should be told that.
8/30/24, 7:38 AM
A pleasure to read as always. Can+t wait for new chapters! Since you asked for suggestions, here are a few things I already fantasized about: -That scene with rescenting Bill really made me wanna see the same happen with either Seth or Mullins, after they make a mistake and allow themselves just a bit too much agency and have to be brought down, harder this time either because Mullins is so new and he has to be shown what happens when you disobey the Alpha or because it's Seth's repeating offence. But I would love to see it in human form, where they really take time to humiliate them physically and verbally, and more dicks can enter them at the same time. -Or Alpha Pete decides he really like seeing Mullins as the pack's bitch and as punishment for trying to keep Zach for himself, makes Mullins submit to Zach and be on the bottom of the pack's hiearchy despite being a senior member. -If there is one of the wolves from the outside entering the area or if some other pack captures one of our wolves, they'd chain him up naked somwhere in their stronghold, so he would serve as a public cumdump/urinal, the whole pack using him to deposit their fliuids, until he's so covered with the scent of the new pack, that all that's on his mind is serving the new pack.

8/30/24, 1:22 PM
@[GoodBoyPuppy](/user/show/10028663) time will tell...
8/30/24, 1:20 PM
Hot take! 😛😛🥵🥵😈
Aug 29, 2024
8/30/24, 12:55 PM
Woah, this is one of the hottest stories I've ever read! Please keep going with it!
Aug 29, 2024
hairyartist
8/30/24, 12:45 PM
I love it thank you!
Aug 29, 2024
Pcm
8/30/24, 10:15 AM
Amazing story! Love when a man is brought into the society of real men by fellow brothers. Is the transformation something Tim started? Want to see Adam helps others initiate new daddies
Anonymous
8/29/24, 11:54 AM
AI story. Boring from beginning to the end. Even the dialogues ... I mean how Ethan can be happy for his friend to have his dick shrunk, and the following sentence be sorry. And the next one, happy and sorry at the same time. Like I say to everyone posting AI story. Please DON'T, even the worst human written story is better than that

8/29/24, 5:04 PM
@Anonymous You don't know that it is AI.

Nonymous
8/29/24, 8:09 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) He's got a point about AI or some text generation because bits of the story are nonsensical: "Jake grinned, a wicked glint in his eye. “Come on, Eth. I know, you’ve always been curious. And now, you’re small enough to take me. All of me.” The whole thing does read as stitched together or edited weirdly

Nonymous
8/29/24, 8:10 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Plus the author bio says I’m not afraid to use AI in my work, and the illustrations are also created using generative tools.

8/30/24, 8:50 AM
@Nonymous I have to say, I love the detective work that's being done. I didn't suspect AI at first, but it would explain some things. "Ethan blushed, but he didn’t look away". This sentence isn't necessarily illogical, but it is odd. I want to say that if it's AI it would explain the sudden and extremely quick mindsets of the characters (or how Jake making Ethan his sextoy was supposed to make it up to him), but it might be because this is the author's first story. I'm not sure its necessarily bad that he used AI but it needed to be used as assistance and not as the full on author.
8/30/24, 8:46 AM
Recently re-read all of "personal toy" and this. You really have some of the best writing on the site.:green_heart: Very emotional, very well-detailed, quite sexy. Superb!:smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
8/29/24, 9:26 PM
Really touching tribute, very well-written.:green_heart:

8/30/24, 8:34 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you Blobby 💜