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Oct 10, 2016
Anonymous
1/5/17, 4:03 PM
If you want to see this story as a cartoon, go to http://thegaycartoons.ratedxblogs.com/stories-directory/the-model
Mutabear
1/5/17, 3:05 PM
I hope we get more milking descriptions
Anonymous
1/5/17, 1:15 PM
it's getting interesting nice mystery going on here
Anonymous
1/5/17, 12:41 PM
Editing the story would be helpful
Anonymous
1/5/17, 11:52 AM
Going well so far. Hopefully daddy makes another appearence
Boone
1/5/17, 10:34 AM
AWESOME!! What a hot way to start a story, I love how pathetic you're turning the cop and that he knows how he looks like. This is great, I can't wait to read the next part. Would be great if you write some scenes with the Jason dishonoring his uniform, or modifying it in some debasing way to ridicule him in front of his Master or other people.
Anonymous
1/5/17, 10:19 AM
Good, good! I enjoyed with the first part and I'm glad to see you're continuing with the story. I like the story, but (and this may sound too fussy), the farm doesn't have much of a farm.Personally, I would like to read more mentions to the kind of things that you see in a farm... you know, some descriptions about places, tools, clothing and the general ambience. But again, that's me. I'll be waiting for part 3!
Anonymous
1/5/17, 9:31 AM
love the progression ... cant wait to see if Nick is made a weak fuckboy ... a mIndless cumdump as payback for his bullying
1/5/17, 6:32 AM
OMG!! This story has everything I'm into. And a few I'm not, but it still didn't stop me reading it again and again. This is what you are so good at. Description of the changes. One visualizes everything reading your transformations. As I said, not everything sat well but in the context of the story I could get off on even the pricklier things. Congrats. Look forward to more of your stories!!!
Anonymous
1/5/17, 6:31 AM
Its my first time reading this entire series and i just wanted to say that this story was HOT. One thing i was curious about is, how does MCP get the baseball team and everyone else to produce so much cum? I know that the rubber and the VR system "stimulates" their body and their brain into thinking theyre having sex, but biologically wise, isnt there a point where the body runs out of cum and needs time to reproduce more? I probably shouldnt wonder about these things as it ruins the fun but i just cant help it. One theory i have is that probably the people of MCP feeds them some kind of formula to help them produce more cum? I dunno... sorry for rambling but yeah, its still a fun series overall