Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/5/17, 10:19 AM
Good, good! I enjoyed with the first part and I'm glad to see you're continuing with the story. I like the story, but (and this may sound too fussy), the farm doesn't have much of a farm.Personally, I would like to read more mentions to the kind of things that you see in a farm... you know, some descriptions about places, tools, clothing and the general ambience. But again, that's me. I'll be waiting for part 3!
Anonymous
1/5/17, 9:31 AM
love the progression ... cant wait to see if Nick is made a weak fuckboy ... a mIndless cumdump as payback for his bullying
1/5/17, 6:32 AM
OMG!! This story has everything I'm into. And a few I'm not, but it still didn't stop me reading it again and again. This is what you are so good at. Description of the changes. One visualizes everything reading your transformations. As I said, not everything sat well but in the context of the story I could get off on even the pricklier things. Congrats. Look forward to more of your stories!!!
Anonymous
1/5/17, 6:31 AM
Its my first time reading this entire series and i just wanted to say that this story was HOT. One thing i was curious about is, how does MCP get the baseball team and everyone else to produce so much cum? I know that the rubber and the VR system "stimulates" their body and their brain into thinking theyre having sex, but biologically wise, isnt there a point where the body runs out of cum and needs time to reproduce more? I probably shouldnt wonder about these things as it ruins the fun but i just cant help it. One theory i have is that probably the people of MCP feeds them some kind of formula to help them produce more cum? I dunno... sorry for rambling but yeah, its still a fun series overall
Titan
1/5/17, 6:23 AM
I look forward to any of your stories and this one I superbly written. Your research into the period is evident and it was so believable. I missed some of your excellent descriptions of the physical change but this is just me. Could I ask for another chapter? Please sir, could I have some more?
The Vault Keeper
1/5/17, 2:08 AM
Sounds hot, I'll keep it mind for sure and may end up writing it somewhere down the line.
Anonymous
1/4/17, 6:13 PM
Willie Cic, you stories are always great but this one is my favorite. Very sensual, well-written. Within the proposal of this site but at the same time different too. Great Job!
Anonymous
1/4/17, 5:17 PM
Weird twists and turns -- compelling read. I enjoyed it.
Anonymous
1/4/17, 1:32 PM
Exciting, can't wait to see more! You're a great writer Rubbrsome, don't feel bad for writing a story with more meat in it :D
Anonymous
1/4/17, 8:37 AM
Part 2- Daddy Master likes playing with his pups and rolling in piss and filth. Some time later he sees the magic box again and inside is a wide leather spiked dog collar that will look great with his harness and chaps. He thinks about the carefree life of his pups and closes the collar around his neck. He becomes the Daddy Alpha Dog to his pups and as the pups are pouncing on their dad the friendly fella from the bar enters the house with toys for his new pets.