Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/3/17, 1:58 AM
Very well-written. But again, the hunter should have played with these five hunks when they passed out! He is not a monk right? lol
Anonymous
1/3/17, 1:32 AM
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1/2/17, 10:00 PM
I can only repeat what others have said here - that you're one of the best writers on this site. All the set-up and background functions as a way to pull the reader in deeper. It's fabulous already. :)
Anonymous
1/2/17, 9:43 PM
Very sensuously erotic writing!
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1/2/17, 9:05 PM
Really wishedsomeone would make a porn film out of that story.
Anonymous
1/2/17, 7:12 PM
I wouldn't mind seeing someone TF into Clanton...
Anonymous
1/2/17, 6:17 PM
Take your time and write it the way you want. Your work has never failed to disappoint. You're one of the best contributors on here, and I always look forward to a new story from you. So take your time, develop it the way you want, and we will all be happy readers!
Anonymous
1/2/17, 5:52 PM
Dude -- Don't apologize. These series have set up time that's needed to develop story. Be proud that people are still reading because this story is incredible. "Sci-Fi-Fucking" has a new champion. I can't wait for the next series of installments.
Anonymous
1/2/17, 5:48 PM
Love love love your work. Just wondering if maybe Mr hersts cooking (concoctions) are what made Nico the way he is, and could the latest gravy maybe change the twins.
1/2/17, 4:45 PM
For nycboot - Thanks again for the generous comment. Even me, the author, will go back and reread some of my stories. After all, they are my fantasies. But Brain Feed is one that I find myself reading over and over. I think I understand your desire for David to have a more gradual transformation. If I remember, I decided to go for the "rush" transformation because the story isn't broken up into chapters. It was just going to be one story, and it was going to go out with a bang. For tomozco - Thanks for the comments. I appreciate that. I wouldn't worry about your storytelling. Us, authors, have to work on our skills. Every story we write is a way for us to improve our storytelling abilities. Not only do we have to come up with a new idea, a new plot, but we also have to think of a new way to narrate or tell the story. This means doing first person, third person, linear, non-linear and all different way of storytelling. I, personally, enjoyed your MCP series. I enjoyed the overall concept and imagery. It's very much in line with what my interests are, and what gets me off. But I will also tell you: that as you continue to write and stretch yourself, your writing will improve. And you will write other stories that will blow the socks off The MCP.