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Anonymous
1/3/17, 11:26 AM
Hey, FreaXed, this chapter is so far the most interesting one, especially when you wrote that Kyle kept touching Brian's body while Brian paid no attention to that. That is really arousing! It reminds of Gayborhood's Skin to Skin whose main character also can freely touch every one around him but no one will be against it. It is a clever way to both keep the tranced character's personality and play with him at the same time. You know, in some works, the main character first met a really arrogant, dangerous, and cool hunk. It will be perfect if that hunk keeps being himself. However, after the main character hypnotized him, he lost all his charm and just kept saying words like "yes, master." "yes, sir" blah blah blah, which is really disappointing. But you didn't! In this chapter, we saw our five friends back but you still gave them what they should behave. That's great! I just wonder whether you will have more plots like "Kyle played with Brian freely but Brian just thought everything was normal" but not the ones like "Kyle asked Brian to play with him, and Brian just said "Yes, master" and wasn't himself anymore." GO! GO! GO! Really love your work!
1/3/17, 10:21 AM
Wow! This is so awesome! Great job!
Anonymous
1/3/17, 9:39 AM
I loved this ... very very sensual ... i pictured everything you spoke of in this story without having to reference the pics you linked to ... great job chevalier
Anonymous
1/3/17, 7:48 AM
So hot!!!1
Anonymous
1/3/17, 6:04 AM
Glad to see you're kicking off the new year with a story! I love the setup so far, it's a really interesting premise, can't wait for more!
1/3/17, 5:45 AM
I guess it was a mistake not to write the scene where i played with them while they're passed out. Because i myself is a somnophiliac but i thought it might come off as rapey haha but I guess of some you guys are somnophiliac too. Lesson learned i guess haha
Anonymous
1/3/17, 1:58 AM
Very well-written. But again, the hunter should have played with these five hunks when they passed out! He is not a monk right? lol
Anonymous
1/3/17, 1:32 AM
Hot
1/2/17, 10:00 PM
I can only repeat what others have said here - that you're one of the best writers on this site. All the set-up and background functions as a way to pull the reader in deeper. It's fabulous already. :)
Anonymous
1/2/17, 9:43 PM
Very sensuously erotic writing!